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no crew, hate, d/r votes
I spit first

good luck

You couldn't "spit a dope rap" if you "regurgitated a joint"/
your lyrics are like "dull serrated blades", they're just "missing the point"/
I'll chaotically corrode your raps, creating colossaus collisions/
my battles "reaction" like "nuclear chains", spliting "heaven and hell" like "divine division"/
my words is a void of destruction, cave in ya mind, and leave you in your brains abyssal/
I spit "bombs that detonate", your records "Iraq", and my flow is the "missile"/
like "spits of sins", I "commit verbal murder" and burst your brain with lethal toxins/
my "wraps"(raps) will "contain"-ya, but dom-N8 couldn't "break out" if he was "boxed-in"/
my lyrics will "penetrate ya soul", "combust your insides" so you can "feel the heat"/
"burn ya retinas", "flash fire ya eyes", I'm "in front of your face" and you can "see defeat"/

sorry it took a while, my computer was fuckin up so it had to restart alot. good luck!!!

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not bad Sane, but not good enough.....
OK, look.....

You’ve got no-flow cos ya words are like a cured epileptic - they don’t fit,
Your punches are like those of a blind phalidomide boxer - you never hit/

The only thing in a *‘state of emergency’ is your child~like~rhyme,
visit a million tutorials & your lyrics still wouldn’t shine~like~mine/

Even ya best is not enough cos u spit like a man wiv no tongue & no saliva,
I drove ya ‘sane’ brain insane now you got ‘dangerous minds’ like Pfeiffer/

Just 15 years old, does ya mamma know you surf the web to look at porn & rap sites?,
Shame on you Sane, If you don’t tell her I will when she’s sittin on my lap tonight/

Sorry dawg but you couldn’t show me ‘defeet’ even if you took off ya socks,
The only elevation you showin is in your pants when you suckin cocks/

*’state of emergency’ = location on his profile

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Sane took this easily...no doubt about...dom you had some really wack lines, there was one good one but that don't cut-it....cuz some detracted from the overall rating from your verse rating

Flow-Both
Punches-Sane(easily)
Complexity-Sane
Wordplay-Sane

Vote-Sane

Imma break this down

Flow-Both
Punches-Sane
Complexity-Sane
Wordplay-none
Multies-none

OVERALL-SANE
NICE BATTLE

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100 CHARACTER BULLSHIT

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iigiht iigiht..........hm............sane merked this cat

Flow-Both
Punches-Sane(DEFINITLEY, by far)
Complexity-Sane
Wordplay-Sane

Vote-Sane

Ok battle:

Punches: Sane
Flow: Both
Multies: None really
Wordplay: Sane

Sane's verse just came harder and had good lines all the way through. Dom N-8's verse was ok, but mom jokes are played and should be used only as a last resort. No hate, but the vote goes to Sane. Keep spittin, both...

i vote for sane.. harder hitting punchlines did it for me

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