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'Street Legend'!? Your 13 Years Old, The Only Streets Your A Legend On Is The --Playground--
I Spit 'Seductive Spits'..Oh My Bad You Can't Comprehend That Cuz Your 7th Grade Vocab Ain't That --Sound--//1

'Savage MC'...Man Your 1002 Posts Deep And Your Still Not A --Phenom--
If Your Laced Ya Spits With 'Steroids' Ya Battle Verses Still Wouldn't --Be-Strong--//2

Your Interest Is 'Girls'?? If That's What Your Like To Call Your --Hand--
Your Got '10 Of Them', But You're Nothing But A --Right-Hand-Man!!--//3

TwOFAceD 99: i'm expectin to lose..lol

^^Your Expectin To Lose!? Why Am I Even --Waistin These Barz--
I Spit For 'Stars', Sicker Than 'SARS', I'll Leave This 'Legend' Blacker Than 'Street'..--Extra Charred--//4

Your Avatar Claims Parental Advisory...Face It..Ya Spits Are Like Your Crew, --Fuckin-Worthless--
Even If Street Was 20,000 LBS. Of Steel, Droppin Ya 'Soft Touches' On Me Still Wouldn't --Hurt-This--//5

**Explanations...**
1) Bar 1 - Legend Is 13..I Said Seductive, But He Prolly Don't Learn That Till 8th Grade
2) Savage MC (That's His Status), 1002 Posts..He Should Be A Phenom
3) Hand...10 of Them (Fingers)
4) TwOFAceD 99 (He Told Me He Was Expectin To Lose On AIM)
5) His Avatar Says Parental Advisory


No Beef, Just A battle

You Really Shouldve Tried To AVOID THIS BEEF Like MUSLIMS FASTING//
I Could Have THE BEST DIGITAL CAMERAS And Couldnt PICTURE YOU RAPPIN//
Meta's Spits Resembles DRYERS -IT HAS NO FLOW AND CYCLES-THE-SAME-SHIT//
LIKE HOCKING LOOGIES B4 ARMAGEDDON COMES -Im About To TIDAL-HIS-LAME-SPITS//**


Wreck-Til-Ya-Burst And Bust Tecs-In-Ya-Verse To Leave You Resting-In-A-Hearst//
Sending Mad Face STRAIGHT TO HELL -Like Kids Caught Having SEX-IN-A-CHURCH//
HURRICANE LYRICS SHIFT RUNNIN FIELDS IN THE AIR And Still Wouldnt UP-YOUR-TRACKS//
You Could ATTEMPT RAPE TO ANCIENT MUMMIES And Not Be Able To TOUCH-ANY-(w)RAPS//

The Young one... u got it right, cuz i beat u nd i'm NOT EVEN OF AGE!!// (juss 13, he 19)
Waitin for me... 10 views, QUIT REFRESHING THE PAGE// (lol)

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^^ That Won It.. Meta's Shit Was Okay, But The Flow
Was Terrible.. Shit Tried To Rhyme But Meta Wouldnt Let It

Street Took This Rather Easily

Vote - SL

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UPPIN...

Street Took This One By Far.His Wordplay And Punches Made The Difference.Meta Was Simply Too Weak.No Good Punches,Worplay Metas And It Barely Flowed

Vote-Streetlegend

this was a hot batle so lemmi brake it down even though it's only front lines


'Street Legend'!? Your 13 Years Old, The Only Streets Your A Legend On Is The --Playground--
I Spit 'Seductive Spits'..Oh My Bad You Can't Comprehend That Cuz Your 7th Grade Vocab Ain't That --Sound--//1

not bad... 13 is actually grade 8/9, im 15.. just turned so the young disses don't sond great to me lol but i ain't hateing, tite bar
i give it a 7/10

'Savage MC'...Man Your 1002 Posts Deep And Your Still Not A --Phenom--
If Your Laced Ya Spits With 'Steroids' Ya Battle Verses Still Wouldn't --Be-Strong--//2

kinda played in the last line, the phenome line wasn't that great either...4/10

Your Interest Is 'Girls'?? If That's What Your Like To Call Your --Hand--
Your Got '10 Of Them', But You're Nothing But A --Right-Hand-Man!!--//3

... wasn't feeling this one, i got it but wasn't that hard.... 4/10

TwOFAceD 99: i'm expectin to lose..lol

^^Your Expectin To Lose!? Why Am I Even --Waistin These Barz--
I Spit For 'Stars', Sicker Than 'SARS', I'll Leave This 'Legend' Blacker Than 'Street'..--Extra Charred--//4

kinda weird how you got him saying he was expecting to losse in that,
TwOFAceD 99: Metavicious has week text....
funny how i could do that to, ok lines, was feeling em, 7/10

Your Avatar Claims Parental Advisory...Face It..Ya Spits Are Like Your Crew, --Fuckin-Worthless--
Even If Street Was 20,000 LBS. Of Steel, Droppin Ya 'Soft Touches' On Me Still Wouldn't --Hurt-This--//5

good finisher.... i think you could of caime much harder with your lyrics thought last line i give an 8/10

total:30/50
... not bad...

You Really Shouldve Tried To AVOID THIS BEEF Like MUSLIMS FASTING//
I Could Have THE BEST DIGITAL CAMERAS And Couldnt PICTURE YOU RAPPIN//

good opener, i like the punches and was likeing the wordplay with the seconde line 7/10

Meta's Spits Resembles DRYERS -IT HAS NO FLOW AND CYCLES-THE-SAME-SHIT//
LIKE HOCKING LOOGIES B4 ARMAGEDDON COMES -Im About To TIDAL-HIS-LAME-SPITS//**

lol, i was liking the seconde line and the first line wasn't bad
8/10

Wreck-Til-Ya-Burst And Bust Tecs-In-Ya-Verse To Leave You Resting-In-A-Hearst//
Sending Mad Face STRAIGHT TO HELL -Like Kids Caught Having SEX-IN-A-CHURCH//

nice multies in this bar, i liked the church line, was feeling it, 8/10

HURRICANE LYRICS SHIFT RUNNIN FIELDS IN THE AIR And Still Wouldnt UP-YOUR-TRACKS//
You Could ATTEMPT RAPE TO ANCIENT MUMMIES And Not Be Able To TOUCH-ANY-(w)RAPS//

i was feeling the first line but the seconde was a lil played, i gave it a 6/10

The Young one... u got it right, cuz i beat u nd i'm NOT EVEN OF AGE!!// (juss 13, he 19)
Waitin for me... 10 views, QUIT REFRESHING THE PAGE// (lol)

lol, nice personal and punch for a finisher, was funny, i gave the final a 8/10

total:37/50

hot battle and i think on the scail that street won this
in catagories he took sum of the main one wich got him my vote

peace

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Mos def street took it, better vocab, structure, word play, basically everythang ........

Vote: street

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