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09-15-03, 12:04 AM | #1 | |
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!Nicely Done!
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Yo…
I be havin these crazy tendencies to tear tendons A felon when I’m functionin with the cerebellum You wake up dazed smellin the sweet aroma from your melon Watch out…When with the Desert Eagle I lower it The after process…Is the tissue in your facial features becomes distorted Compare this to a miss communication in television pixilation Shit just doesn’t match up correctly But you aint ready for a fatal fatality…Especially one of crazy antics Twist your limbs into a shape that hasn’t been discovered yet by mathematics In lyrics and in life I tend to become graphic like a porn actress Blooding humans beings up and down like dumb dykes on a dirty mattress Fuck a top 5 or 10…I don’t give a damn about your Hip-Hop status Fuck a globe…I’ll erase your flesh from the entire atlas Penetrate your lower abdomen with a steel spike Lay you out in a corn field spread eagle naked Then watch your anatomy get tortured by lighting strikes |
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09-15-03, 12:20 AM | #2 | |
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didnt rhyme very much but u had ill imagery,ill wordplay,tight piece kinda baffled myself,keep droppin.~1~
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09-15-03, 01:17 AM | #3 | |
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no problem and i will
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09-15-03, 01:43 AM | #4 | ||||
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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hate to drop 1 liners but that just about sums it up Quote:
sorry for the quote.. good job on the drop hope to see a little better structure on the next Quote:
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09-15-03, 02:01 AM | #5 | |
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once again no problem
i can't help it if i'm dope |
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