CALLEN~CENTZ out to battle....
is an eaxmple..... of a synonymn realated metaphoric sample.
this is ORDER OUT BEAF WITH A DELIVERY to SQUAB-
when situation gets intense i dispence ass wippings,
usen your larenex~and an~immence loogie glob.
to mop the floor with you.... like you were a swab.
i inflict disaster.
delivering punchelines that mix faster- with verbs to become material matter.
then i use that matter to answer-the question of how i can leave your imperviously clattered- rap format -shattered-like a snapped thorax.
they call me the human PUNCHLINE for a reason- my metaphors are hard enough to leave a biters gumline bleeding.
your skillz are like male pattern baldness...continuously receading-
while mines are exceeding the rpm rate of a ferrari breaking mach 14 speeding.
been to rehab 3 times for my mic fiending-and im still addicted-to leaven you afflicted-by anthing i can say weather or not i script it.
give me 30 minutes or less and my deliverence of flames be like DOMINOS HEAT WAVE-you wanted an m.c. that could rock right so i left a path paved.
i gave the world what the craved-ill joint for smoken.
my songs could O.D. the average mc. no wonder they say im DOPE~MAN.
you exclusive wanna be rappers have no clue.
im abusive to your colon beating the shit out of you.
NONCENTZ the kingarden drop~out-that beat you with words till the nerve you gathered to battle pops~out-through your mouth.
this how my OMEN's migrated and invaded- we authentic while your like getting BRAINS from your SISTER... cause your every THOUGHTS REALTED.
im serving life behind my bars and there's no chance for parole-
fuck a pay role-in one sentence i can convins you to paying a toll.
for comitting the crime-of thinking you can fuck with mine-and cross that line.on the other side im waiting to drop bombs reinforcen my words with landmines.
this a freestyle.... i didnt need a pen-to murder these men-or fems.but if seams forced that's cause it is... my brain didnt want to do this to them.
so when i say "one time for your mind" thats cause you dont have enough brain to record it if i rewind.

uppin

DAAAYUMMMMMMMMMMMMM this shit was hotness...the fucking vocab and qordplay was off the fuckin hooooock.....ayo very nice ...this shit was ill...


10/10 mics from me and thats hard to get

I'm proud to have you in the fam twin...keep doin' ya thing...

THNKS PAPA

uppin

man.. this verse was ill as hell, I like the word play, and vocab
keep straight for da omens mang
A.T.

thnks pop that meant alot to me

A diss track, right?
Again - i couldnt catch the flow to this piece, you change it up too many times, the lines are all over the place in your verses, wordplay was subtle, i caught most of it, probably need to know all the beef to get it all but i got most of the punches and such, nothing really made me go O_O but it was decent, multi's and internals helped it a little, a couple seemed forced as i read it but im guessing they flow in your accent, writers voice wasnt too apparent in this, structure could be switched to make it easier on the eyes, blah at a ten out of ten, nothing is EVER ten out of ten, theres always something that can be improved - a true emcee knows that.

Reply to mine Wpord, and no bullshit one sentence reply neither = )

Eace-Pay!

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W o r d P e r f e c t

good:
vocabulary
wordplay

bad:
structure
flow (in some parts)

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UPPIN

hmmmmm long ass diss. i wonder if your vocab is really just the way you talk. dope all around but not ten out of ten maybe 8.5/10. the multis and internal rhyming were good of course the vocab was nice but your flow was hard to catch didn't fit to any beat i tried but maybe i put the wrong emphasis on the wrong songs. good drop dawg.

I WROTE THIS THROUGH EVERY BEAT ON CAN---BUS THE FIRST CD I SWITCH PATTERNS ALOT WHEN I RHYME SHIFTING SPEEDS AND CONTEXT THEY FIT BEATS TRUST ME BUT I DO HAVE A VERY OFF WAY OF RHYMING

Hey that was sick. You brang it hard with that one. Excellent wordplay, good flow and good structure. It would be hard topping that one. Keep it up.

SO PEOPLE KNOW THIS WASNT A DISS TO ANYONE BUT INSTEAD TARGETING EVERYONE WHO I BEAF WITH