aiyo,

another piece of mischief put into art form,
another shot of vodka to keep my hear warm,
and Tums for my stomach and for this fuckin heart burn,
cause I'm sprayin off random shots and spittin em hardcore,
so how the fuck am I supposed to do what the teacher says,
when I gotta baby on the way and my ex-girl just went lez,
So I took a hit of X...
flipped out and got twisted and broke both my fuckin legs on a fucking flight of steps, yo...
I never needed anybody to push me, cause I'd only push em back,
I'ma spark plug ignitin fumes wit ya crew, and always talkin smack,
I'm mainly pursuing a crazy dream I once had,
of being on stage in only a g-string and a dew rag and still nobody would laugh....
I'm not always this serious, I'm usually sparatic and funny,
I'ma recovering crack addict and drugie, in pursuit of havic and dumb things, cause I aint got money,
so why not enjoy the time I got on this earth,
and smoke the pot from birth, why not...
my brains already dead... and here in a moment I'll be repeat the same shit that I already said, my palms are sweaty and red...
I guess too masterbation in the face of sexual aggrevation aint exactly what I'd call stress... haha

ROTFLMMFAO.... ohhhhhhhh shit... this was just some dumb shit...
hit me up if you get a good laugh outta this...
A.T.

I'm guessin nobody here has a sense of humor...
cause I'm uppin, but yall aint responding... lol

c'mon yall... LAUGH!
cant take life too serious... right?

haha

that was great

"so how the fuck am I supposed to do what the teacher says,
when I gotta baby on the way and my ex-girl just went lez"

that made me crack up dawg

haha good drop tho, had a nice flow
check out me and saracen's collab, it's called girls
oh and hit me up with a pm if ya wanna do a collab

that was pretty hot it was like a mix of a really fucked up eminem and buddens good drop

lol... thanks yall, glad yall enjoyed it...
A.T.

UPPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!
gimme some feed people... IM STARVING

i thoguth you started slow....just didn't bring no fire in the begining....as you went further you got nice on it ...wordplay was niceness...but other then your entry it was dope onez


return the favor on IJL's first collab

yeah, you on some slim shady shit right here... lol... that style be fun to read sometimes... lol... mad sarcasm and shit, and if it flows steady it makes the it nicers...
This was cool... keystyle right?
the shit had some flow, and wordplay...
not much too it, but it was funny...
" another piece of mischief put into art form"
^I liked that line, liked the way you started it...

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thanks for the feed alias-c
EVERYBODY NEEDS TO READ THIS SHIT AND HAVE A GOOD LAUGH>>>>!!!!!
one,
A.T.

it started of okay but u kicked it up a notch later on

nice drop dunny,

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^ Your | This Close | to being banned, moron.
I'll leave you feedback later my man, just had top warn these kids about their bullshit replies to open mic pieces. .

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hah @ this close..^^...but yo dunny...this waddnt a bad piece...waddnt ADD..not as dope as youd like...ya flow was pretty shit...but it did have some funny ass lines...i can feel you duke...when you go through som shit and ish just pops onto the screen when you spit....keep droppin though..

igido

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RN Vs RB WAR!!....yr 2000...vet~~YEA I SAID VET!! WHAT YOU WANT ME TO PROVE IT? STEP THEN YOU FUCKING HOMO'S

yeah that flow was funny as hell i liked that my girl went lez line that that was some funny shit my nigga keep writin my nigga

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