i have felt tha blood trickle down my face
i have heard it hit tha ground
i do not know if it splattered or if it melted right into tha soul of Mother Nature
but i do know now that i have been given freedom
freedom beyond a physical being but of mental...
and emotional...
welcome me...

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i like that, i like short and swet ones with a philosophical meaning. very good.

I don't understand it real well. But that's just me. Unless of course it has to do with the pain of being sliced up as an escape from the pain of life. But cutting oneself is a bad thing, and one should seek help.

I dunno, I've been off my rocker lately.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

I don't understand it real well either. I came up with a different meaning than, Necro. I liked reading it. One of those types of writings you could get several different things from. Pretty good.

Though i got two or three different meanings out of this. The first one (which i stick with) is freedom in death. It being a kind of relief from the intensity of one's life.

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i dont know, i couldnt understand it myself, came up wit another meaning too!!!

ok...this was actually tha point...much plus many meanings to a single short poem...

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Nicely written got a lil thrown off after the mother nature's soul as far as rythm went, but I liked the intensity of it. I loved the third line, 'specially the first part of it. Kinda wished it would have rhymed but that's your perogative. Nice drop, definatly deep and definatly something that was powerful in it's length. Peace

short and sweet i love it stay up