Shower subsonic pages creating meteoric craters//
Racing legless against a secret pegusus agent//
Force out my jaws, pushes at concorde torque//
Nitrous juice boost sound zoom blastroom source//
Know me as the bomberman expert, as I exert//
An explosive verse with letter shrapnel that hurts//
Stangulation with a pendulum, fool mc's into spitting lisp//
Get hit with my hypnotic spits, sending you into deep inter-planatery trips//
Wizardary spells, I dispel hell within a spherical object//
Illusionist whizzing a high tech black magic rocket//
The endless pocket of words, ten thosand word juggler//
Feed y'all a cup of english tea, you still cant be the master mugger//
For every phrase I sustain I spray a high range of graffiti//
Easy demolition destructer property world crusher genie//
My wishes are true, I deminish falses with the good o'l written//
Every sentence spitting I end an existence of the life of a kitten//
You must be kiddin, cus im child abusing all you useless//
All you losers that try to make money from exploiting this music//

no doubt showing that skill man...
You're flowing pretty well here, and you got strong vocab...
No disrespect, but in my opinion, it's a good thing you left this short... cause I would've gotten boring after a while... it's got good wordplay and all... but some ain't gon' feel it too much... to me it seemed nice... it would sound hot in audio... but it gets a bit monotinous... know what I'm saying? maybe not... lol...

Peace man

thanx mayne, appreciate it. uppin still