as i think of in my life hesitation..... stopped me from elevation....feeling irate and betrayd by these men.... sendin ppl to the state pen... when they just wanna fit in... be understood for theyre oppinions..... and being a real man... misunderstood youth...and the belive its the truth that all we do is smoke weed and shoot... when the goverments the one that pollutes... to speak the truth they dont feel the need to... lyin so that they will be ellected... and talk about freedom and respect when they dont respect shit... but either my speaches will be hit or miss... but if i can reach the kids.. and teach them to never submit... and if they have somthin to say... write it down in a script and well all make hits.. my childhood frends dirived from religion... and if u keep ur visions hidden... then this world we live in will never be ridden of humiliatin... and self doubt... just be urself and u will win the last bout... now the craps out and its time for u to make a decision... u hang out with these kids but they aint friends.. so just be urself and ppl either come or leave man... but every person u meet should be treated with belife... and even ppl say ur conceided...u only are if u beleive in it... u should make sure ur needs are met...
and please respect this shit i said... becuz be cause its for ur own benifet.. my message is heaven sent... and i know im makin it-- and haters they can hate but i hold it irrelivant... we gotta finally make a settlement... and ppl should shine like a lantern lit... in the dark lightenin up the pathway to a new start

nice flow you had some nice bars in that piece keep elevatin nigga

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ill spit rip and shit on u--im needin food-- but ur givin me shit so im not gonna be belivin u//
i dismantle your lrycal arsenal-- hit u with a barstool and install sum fear in u//
im hearin doodz-- and u know it when i stare at u beware cuz the beer has got me overwhelmd with madness sadness//
bad shit and the last kid that thought he had it got a fat lip//
im equipped with lyrical weapons// verbals hurt u and pentrate to ur heart in ur chest and//
on my last breath i hope im high... get me closer to god let me in heavens door-- im ready now what are u waitin for//
take me lord-- the world duznt wanna see what i got in store
--but i shall cry no more//
im tellin all my friends my hopes and dreams -- and all i asked them to see-- what was the man in me//
but they called it insanity and humanity didnt give a damn for me//
never make due for what u belive is treatin u not as an equil//
and all along i been turning to water bong -- been just avoiding the problem not fully realized what was goin on//
and life goes on and on--parents cant releate untill i stayed up late-- became a son that will be great//take in and
stay tru to ur essence--as a matter a fact us adolecents--should all stay black and feel gods precence//
sometimes things dont make sence and its pathetic --tragic accedents will only happen if u let em//
and in my dreams see god and i met him--died a thousand times rehincarnated in my life span//
im really a nice man or mabey a boy trapped not knowing what kinda life hes in//
so i smoke a newport-- cuz it helps me relax what u give me ima give it back//belive that
realize that our individualty is under attack-- and fake niggaz wont last stayin tru to myself until my lifes past//

just uppin and bussin till theres nothin leaft...

im crazed and deranged mentally insane--lickin on candy canes--todays the day its the day that christmas came//
with flying reighndeer leaves hoofprints for a moment then they dissapear//
santas not showin fear with my elves on my side-- and we all gettin high and ready to ride//
little girl were u naughty or nice--naughty -- so i guess ill hafta pay the price to rock your little body//
and if u call ur momy--with out deley 3 way sprayin santas seed into momys tummy//
all of santas helpers love me but ones who dont belive are the the ones that taught me//
love thy neighbor like ur own brother or ull be the victem elv hitmen as we ride comitting man slaughter//
my whole crew is suicidle what u gon do theres a diferent one of me for germans and none for hebrews//
and ill belive u-- only if ur makin a wish--becuz constant crying andmoaning makes u look like a bitch//
little timmy asked me for a dimy-- we blazed up saved some cuz that magic dust was gettin to me//
and now i see hallucinations in my sights// merry christmas to all and nonbelivers can fuckin bite me//

hahaahaha i was in the christmas spirit--even if it was kinda early hit me back...