[B] 14 blue

Holla atcha ya gurl. Im jus hittin sum up real quick aight.

Five glocks or not imma leave ya skull hott//
pullin niggaz from whips and the 5-0 drops//
leavin bodys to rot in crack house parkin lots//
pluss them dope feenz out at ten O-klock//
killin niggaz fa fun, havin bitches on the run/
makin niggaz on the block cry for heavins gun//
and no matter what i do, this bitch gon' stay #1//
plus the cops are lookin fa meee

inocence is crazy cause life does not phaze me//
gotta go to state cause bitches wont last in juvi//
got hiddin knives and cover blast up the uzziez//
and the only way to live is if you straight blast up thru me//
im the domonate bitch the one you cant fuck with//
bringin niggaz to there kneez in drop death pits/
niggaz cheakin out there aim to run my whole cru witz//
cause they cant live in peace itz the whole damn opposite//


just a lil sumthin
how wuz it??
holla back

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Oohhhhh..........Lil mami got Skills

First of all this piece was HOT..........U came out iLL..........U had clever wordplay........Ur Multies were good.............Vocab was down though , this piece was simplistic but still tight....Nice content and all...But next time try to come up wit a better concept to spit about...........This concept was just freestyling , u didnt have any topic...........Next time come up wit a topic
to spit about................U got skills fam......Both verses were strong....U kinda fell off in some parts.......But you still gotta elevate though.........U got potential , U got tha skills........Just elevate on your metaphors , vocabulary and multies.....Try to make ur open mics longer.....And never put a tittle like what u did.....Next time try to figure out what this piece was about...And put down a tittle relating to it......Like u could have named this piece......" My Intro " or " Lyrically Insane " , sumthin in that department........I am looking forward to read more open mics from u.....................And one more thing.............WE GOTTA COLLAB..........lol

aight i'll work on it a little bit, thanx

im bout to be out but tomorrow im gonna hit the site
up wit about 5 tomorrow ok
1
and good look

oh and im up wit the collab
holla back

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one per day..

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis