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- The undecided -
- Not quite devoted to Catholocism -
- Islam -
- The extremist-
- Lucipher, himself -
Narrator - AKA G. freaking Hod


Some things are disproportionized - distorted by a sort of tide
Influential as it is, religion is considered morbid when it's fortified
Truthfully, I praise a being. . No label, I have no officialized belief(s)
I praise Him, thine Lord. . But, I feel the real issue lies beneath



Whilst I believe. . No questions in regards to where my soul started
I don't devote my life to the church yet I discard it there as whole-hearted
I trot through life on a high-horse, or so it seems. . My cares are mundane
I speak to my Lord every night. . But, save the "real" prayer for Sundays



Devotion is there. . My prayers are numerous, yet rocketed slowly
If the Book cleanses its keeper, I'd say that my pockets are holy
I say to hell with "the hijackers;" To hell they're reporting with bombs
They fueled the liberal media; Now see how they're distorting Islam?!



Our numbers are small; On the other hand, our influence is dominant
If I am handed a shot at martyrdom, I will head into it with confidence
We shocked em! The teens can't pretend to "care for" the scene we defend
Praise You, my Lord - Your word is spoken: there is always a means to an end!



Infidelity! They loathe me - I reap and sew the hateful steeples
I am the reason for Heaven's population; I motivate the people
I created "religion". . The fate is envisioned - my views repent the smells -
Of the "Undecided" crowd, who absolutely refuse to enter Hell!"



Disregard my opinions - I prithee to, yet I stay retarding His minions
Heed my advice and find yourself - Have no qualms in parting religion(s)
He influences every move - I hope your head will miss his edifice
Is it so much "making it to Heaven," or just avoiding His red abyss?

ask yourself this before proclaiming religion.

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Post, you dick. Otherwise, my color-coding goes to waste !

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Im Here.. Ima Post Soon Hopefully Shit Dont
Go Wrong.. If So, My Bad.. I'll Still Post In The Morning
Even Tho Tik Wont Count It.. Just So I Can Show You
I Did Do Suttin.. Cuz I HaVe To Leave and I Didn't Finish
It.. Good Shit None The Less.. I'll Try TO Get My Shit IN

What They Knew

A Pedestrian Investin-In Weapon Development..
Didn't Know What A Felon-Meant, But Kept Sellin-It..
Out Of His Element.. Spent Life On The Black Market..
Couldn't Stop To Start-It, Til He Started The War Shit..
Didn't Want No-More Shit, And For This Spent Time Impounded..
Crowds Downed-Him, Funny What A Few Verbs N' Nouns Did..
They Would Surround-Him, He Had His Pride N' Tried To Protect It..
Neglected.. w/o No Life.. Bars N' A Bed Was All he Was Left-Wit..

What He Found

Face In Anguish, Had What He Came Wit.. Call For Changes..
Criminally Famous, Started To Read A Book, The Author Nameless..
Read For Ages, Pages n' Pages.. Found His Calling..
Caught From Falling, Was In Touch w/ Sumthing 3 Weeks Ago, Would Have Been Appauling..
Was Released From Jail.. Half His Life Away..
Spends Half The Day.. Wit His Best Friend In Pray..
Gray Clouds Stray.. Met A Gurl, Soon To Be Wife..
Everything Was Nice.. Everything Bad, Strayed From His Life..
10 Years Later, 2 Children N' A Government Job..
A Cabin Lodge.. Wit His Wife, Kids N' God..
Satan Discouraged, His Plan Worsened..
Didn't Expect The Courage Of A Merdurous Person..
Needed Something To Cloud Him.. He Couldn't Allow It..
So He Vowed Shit, To Do Sumthing About It..

What Happened

His Wife Took The Back Roads From Work To Pass Time..
3 Trucks In A Fast Line.. She Would See Life For The Last Time..
A Quarter Past Nine, He Gets The Ring On His Phone..
A Ruined Home.. As He Collapses, Hears Nuthing But The Dial Tone..
He Tried To Smile Though.. Until His Kids Are Abducted n' Slayed..
Insomnia For Days And Days, Pray over Pray.. But Didn't Get His Way..
He Was Sick Of The Sadness, Sick Of Bein Angry At A World He Loved..
Kids He Hugged, Now His Entire Life n' World Was Struck And Fucked..
God Was Luck.. Thought With A Gun In His Right Hand Wishing To Be Vanished..
"Just The Way I Planned It'' Arms Folded Standin, Lucifer's Wish..... Granted..

. votes, please!

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Wow. Both of you--wow.

Auspicious- Really good, the ending was just...Bloaw! Real good man.

G.Hod - My god. This was...well amazing to put it bluntly. I mean...wow. Um..Wow

I don't need to justify myself. This was somewhat close, but G.Hod still took it I felt. Vote = G.Hod

Good work both of you.

yes...this was a dope ass battle...both of y'all came with originality out the ass...and both of y'all had a fuckin' incredible story to tell...I was like DAMN...this shit was fuckin' dope...but I feel that G.Hod had this battle due to the wordplay and the multi'z he used made it flow better to me than Auspicious' verse...I also liked the color coding thing...that really showed creativity and it also helped the structure out a lot...although Ausipicious had some dope ass structure too but I like the way G.Hod seperated it into religious groups...both of y'all came dope as fuck and both of y'all just bledgeoned the subject that was chosen for you...
vote- G. Hod

Oh and I wanted to say (jokingly with a herb accent)

I voted for G.Hod cuz of all the pretty colors.

lol .. Its All Good.. Thanks For Votes
Its ONly Pre-Season Ne Ways.. Just-For-Fun Shit
.. Good Shit Hod.....

alrightey.
shitty votage this week, I'm gonna try to make it better for next week.
You guys both did well.

G Hod gets the win. It's only pre season though.
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