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Old 09-19-03, 12:31 AM   #1
Caliph Corleone
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rap music style decicated to BDP

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KRS 1)
we want that rap music that rap music


JAH RULE JAH RULE

we comin to bring the real back in hiphop jah rules all the time/
1 2 12 3 check it out man dont try to bit the lyrics
cORLEONE GO AND WRECK THE BOOMBOX JAH

jah fortunate lickity spit cataclysm that my genre emits/
niggas quit and bit the style/
but check ive been doin this for a while/
when i say bit the style/
i mean the false accusations/
talkin bout pimps and hoes but aint tryin to save the nation/
if your nations jail i got the bail/
call jacques cousteau and get on a sail/
right now kapow lyrical messages ventilated through traumatic receptives/
check it thats the style from the great scott la rock/
he got shot but we didnt go pop/
straight from being criminal minded to moving up by any means necessary/
when i saw rappers bitin the style i was very scary/
so i became the teacher and invented ghetto music the blueprint of hip hop makin rappers face charges of wack rap in their arraignment/
forced to listen the teachings of the blastmasters edutainment/
what a waste niggas takin up space lets haste start it over how could i get ova when the cold war aint over/

stop bitin the lyrics man.
shout out to krs1 one of my top 3 MCS after pun and nas of course
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Old 09-19-03, 02:01 AM   #2
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lol i had a whole feedback done... then i saw it was your sig...

good rep of Boogie Down

while the structure on the screen looked all off the flow was easy to find. quick suggestion: dont repeat the same phrase again like u did 2 times

jah fortunate lickity spit cataclysm that my genre emits/
niggas quit and bit the style/
but check ive been doin this for a while/
when i say bit the style/
i mean the false accusations/
talkin bout pimps and hoes but aint tryin to save the nation/
if your nations jail i got the bail/


nationg and bit the style.. doing that makes you look bad

'sides that it was a good drop kid! and just put the whole song on your sig while your at it... kidding

good drop

if you would be so kind *not a battle*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80529
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80134
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Old 09-19-03, 03:04 AM   #3
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this was an ill piece,good rythm,good structure,good vocab,good wordplay, i like the multis and the way this came out.over all nice drop.~1~
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Old 09-19-03, 02:29 PM   #4
Caliph Corleone
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i was basically biting KRS style on this. much respect
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