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Withersman spits first

checkin in......and you go first because you challeneged me so go first...................
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My styles arcane, it leaves rappers lame in the brain so they can’t spit straight/
My lyrics’ll plunder your thoughts, cause your “flow” is like “scared teen girls”, its to “late”!/
I “pillage vocab”, “destroy your bars” with my “verbal blitzkriegs”/
You could never “live up” to my “stand”ards, like I “chopped off this cats-legs”/
I spit the most “noxious” of flows, causing “virulent infections” to “exhaust” your “brainstream”/
Your “mind” is “running outta words”, cause you got “verbs sprinting outta ya dreams”/
I’ll “eat” you like “pawns” on a “chessboard”, “checkmate” your raps, cause I easily “Queen-this”/
Even if Withersman “jacked off his brain”, he still couldn’t have a “stroke of genius”/
My lyrical assault will “deplete ya stamina”, “take ya breath away” like I “tore out ya lungs”/
Withersman couldn’t be “hard on my level” if he used “ladders with viagra rungs”/

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damn sane that was some ill shit man.......hey man im from pahoa side man......i come back and drop a vote on this shit when the otha man spits

wow cool...do you go to Pahoa? you got AIM...hit me up at audo324...

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where you at Withersman???

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yo my power just got back on I was hit by that hurricane. I'm startin my verse now..................................
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The iniquitous of my rhymes leave yours devouerd and minced//
your punches are baby steps while mine are vehemence//
You call yourself Audo but you have no infrasonic lyrics//
You probably get head from your dad just to raise up your spirit//
your rhymes are to recitative do be in this rap game//
actin all hard while in reality your a mediumistic mayn//
look at this wannabe Canibus tryna spit big words//
yea I'm doin the same, but I gotta get rid of this herb//
Audo and Sane both the same emcees, thats what he does to feel better as the rector//
Your leader needs two profiles just to up his record//
you speakin that bullshit expose your deliberate nerd spectrum//
Talkin about viagra, you probably wish you could fuck yourself in the rectum//

sane took most of this..........
wordplay, punches flow
but i think withersman took this on personals....
too bad i cant vote.... my vote would be sane

sane...is just on another level then this cat....
Flow---ill say TIE
Punches---sane
wordplay---Sane
vocab---Sane(almost to much)
multis---none
mettas---sane

VOTE SANE

ps....not so many quotes-

withersman came weak, sane came nice, its that simple..

You probably get head from your dad just to raise up your spirit//

this line threw me off^^

keep elevatin but sane took this hands down.

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<center>Deja Vu

..Remember These Dope Kids?..

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Flow-Both
Pucnhes-Sane
Multi-Sane
Vocab-Sane
Personals-Wither

Overal-Sane

Yep that verse was pretty good, nice overal flow and good punches, the vocab was like... wow.

Forgot to drop this link, you can't edit in Front Lines.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80508

lol o well. I didnt take this battle seriously anyway.......................
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