I am the danger lion, lie-on the pillars of zion\\
My intergallactic styles, i practice and i rely on\\
At warp speed ten my flows attack you, each like a trend\\
The true speed of them depends on if you apprehend\\
Gigahurts, millahurts lyrics hurts niggas\\
On the earths astroturf i kill political figures\\
Danger sighns on my bedroom door you chose to ignore\\
Suffer the consequenses, taste the pain I endure\\
Last four lines are as lethal as a spell\\
Evicted from hell by the angel gabriell\\
Victory to me means, beating the devil himself\\
Everything else, including myself must be in stealth\\
Like the matrix, and shadows, mutilated cattle\\
Someone reply if you wanna battle\\

Reply to this shit!!!

yo, yo. i mayb new but im not new to me, or hip n' rnb,
listen to yourself, spluttering crap about hell and shit,
you've confussed hip hop with real life damb it,
confussed your brain? consumed your soul? ha!
Now its nothing but a lost hole, leading down, its getting to deep so hold your nose, cus, here comes the odesy of long timed mystery wondering how dis 'lil white girl is gona make it through this shit witch she calls life. Not knowing who her mom is, not knowing who her dad is, but wiv sm1 as imposter. Yea, imposter family! I wana break through like my idol. no wait. i dnt thnk you understand, i can be my own idol with rnb so you all listen to me. Its getting even harder, trying to provide for my holmies, wich proud to call friends, with one speacial person, yeah samual fullstow thats da best with him as suport, sm1 ort 2 srt me out! B4 i break free and shout! i cant stand this fase, i gotta realte but the beat goes on n so do i, stood by with my pride. yo.

i wana battle.

yo bitches if u wanna batle then post in the bitch slapped if u wanna battle don't bring that shit in here

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^damm... at least say something bout the little verse man... lol...

I thought it was aight.... liked your wordplay, flow was cool... kinda short though... I see this as short freestyle...
I ain't feeling that tittle though... lol...
good drop man...

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Yeah, this was pretty decent for how short it was, the flow was there, good use of multi's, it could of used more internal rhyming i felt, maybe some imagery and depth would of improved this, try aiming for an actual topic piece instead of a "Bragging Writes" pieces where its only about you being god like.

Overall though it was ok, nothing really standout but you have the basics down, just need work.

Reply: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80973

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that was a hot drop good flow some multis ok vocab all around good drop

safe to all of the emcees that said some good shit about my first post (not *K-os)

that is some good shit
u learn from the best me
just joking keep it up man
but icant wait till i battle u

haha, i just noticed that shit, pretty creative but some places lacked alittle like:



keep elavating

the fuck.........god levels.........i mean u got the flow and
all with the "big" vocab, but that really had no fuckin
point, no topic, no reason for that waste of online space,
fuck head, god levels? fuckin ur worse then i was last yr
u need serious elivating, so u can make some points in
ur shit, i mean ur just babblin shit like a drunk atheist,
cats like u just piss me off... just cause u use big vocab
doesnt mean ur dope, just cause u have flow ur not dope.

fuck
GOT SKILLZ????I THINK NOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT

reurn the fuckin favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81857