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10 lines min.
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Topic : Physical Brusies to Mental Ones

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LowerTown's Finest

what what govnah?
I'm in for sure and all that.

And just for the sake of it all, Word Life
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extra characters like what?

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Physical Brusies To Mental Ones

Animus analogue may be that of physical reflexes,
Reflexes in which necks are seized to contort.
Messages exchanged by speeches upon machines,
Or it may resort with forced anchored knuckles.

Sever desolation may be that of mental damage,
Damages which elicit tears from twin spectators.
Soaked approach of liquid steel emotions,
That poison my frozen being,
And loosen these few cold soul buckles.

The conclusion of the difference is this,
This of my own opinion within the topic.
Distance between a fist and then of a love coward.
Fists that may give you bruises,
Yet a coward in love hurts himself by hiding attitude.
Now, my pain is out and devoured.

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Onomontopeia In My Head Reversing My Psychology
The Fists Flying; Unaligned, Untimed, Satan's Apology
Has Hold Of The Intellectuals, Seemingly Redundant
Fossil Fuels Are Brainwaves, Redeemingly Abundant
Windchimes Of The Past Haunt Those Who Are Present
Black And Blue That Will Dance For The Lowly Peasant
It's Pleasent; He Teaches Us Songs In Faux Fur Harmony
The Pope Was Caught Stealing Freedom From The Armory
It's Harmin Me; Walk With Confidence In The Darkness
You Knew Where Everything Was? Fate Double Parked Us
It's The Brain Pain Coach! Lost In Your Sane Approach
Pile Me Off To The Left With The Rest Of What Is Gauche
Pay A Penny For What I Meant? It's Just Common Cents
Your Mind May Be Unscathed, But The Fender's Full Of Dents

...And The Mental Ones, And Twos, And Threes, With Physicality Were Seized...

wErd?

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voterz in here please, tell us what you think and break em down and shit please dont be stingy with the

i thought his was better overal vote blah

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LowerTown's Finest

let's get some voters in here please.


so we can get this closed and finished.

thanks!............

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LowerTown's Finest

Not a single vote in over 24 hours...

Sad, but understandable.

This battle was alot like tryin ta read greek.

Knightshade came very, very complex.
But didn't feel the need to use many rhymes.
When he did, they were scattered.
I'm sure he meant to do this...
Why, I'm not sure.

Ya know...
In my "still herbish after over 100 battles" opinion...

Understatement killed this battle with good format, impressive and complex multi's, and tight wordplay.

Knightshade came so deep, so complex...
It was something like Byron.
Which is poetry.

My mindframe was that this was a rap battle seeing as it's in the Elite Front Lines.

That's how I voted.

Hope it don't piss anyone off.

Peace

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it shows you dont do poetry battles. and im glad you dont either. stick to the front lines where you belong IMO.

thanks for voting.

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LowerTown's Finest

I clicked "quote" after I read it, so I could say what lines I liked best...but as I was about to find the lines I liked when I first read it, I realized...wait...this whole fucking thing is quotable.

Knight I'm sorry...But understatement, he just...damn man!

goin up like richard simmons watch "shaving ryan's privates"


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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Understatement took this...

Great imagery... vocab... etc...

Good shit from Shade as well....

But Understatement took this one

^Chrit, can you edit the poll so that Bruk's vote shows up?

up like whoa!
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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Vote - Understatement

I liked knights verse, but he didnt really have the content that maven brought to this, i thought Under came with better imagery and such in his verse, a stronger wroiters voice and better word choice kinda edged it out for me.

Not a bad battle, but yeah, Understatement got you bro.

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good drop understatement. want a rematch sometime?

anyways uppin for 1 more vote...........
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LowerTown's Finest

good battle u guys...i respect u both...but yea i agree with everyone else...i think understatement got this one...knightshade u came decent...but understatement...just spit this with fire...verse was consistent....flowed nicely...knightshade...ur verse was decent also but just wasn't enough to take understatement's verse...

good battle u guys...

overall vote- understatement...

yep..
pz...