I'll make your brains take flight like a sparrow-
see an army of militant pharoahs-dethroned by an aramada of primitive arrows.
my mind is a weapon-in seven-i serve blessens, sever revrens, and enemies atop the heavens.
then decend them-while they souls acenden-with another eleven.
penetraten-culminaten- assasinaten-and send them to satan-as priority mail.... addressed to hell..
my lyrical weight is off the scale.
unbalanced against the planets-NONCENTZ produce ten bars fallowed more then ten commandments.
i spit the sea- lyrically- i split the "C"- from M.C. mathmaticaly-
drown everything verbally if it claims identity between.
the gilleteen-with rhyme scheme-my lyrics tighter then DR DRE in 32 inch LEVI jeans.
all you here is HOLY SHIT -from my unholy script- master the serpeant content with my venemous spit.
there's no hope-my spoke qoute could choke the throat of the pope.
im colossul- with gothic sandscript crucifying apostiles with hostile gosphels.
religion is dead if you dont belive in CENTZ THE GOD-your outcasted as i go to holy war against you frauds-like ALLAH and the JE~HA~D.
IT'S NONCENTZ one of the last of the true latins-
rock rappen and avalanchen the sacrin-im unknown, so the world wont know how it happened-until its full blown.the disease matured to full grown-infecting both sides of the o-zone.
im blazing...maken you 2 tones-like chord phone.
amazen ....with the rhymes that make rappers monotone like feminen harmones.
the world been keeping the knowledge hostage.
i secreate it to a ink cartridge then choke your tonsils with your jaw cartilage.
im still agnostic-holocaustic-with lyrical insight like NOSTRAUDOMUS 'S fiber optics.
is it to complex like and albinos complects?
i'll simplify it for you..
your a hermaphrodictic angel, you rappers is same sex-with you gay aspects-if it dont work for a hoe whow you gnna suck then ask for respect?
your nothing,getting paid your worth in blank bank checks.
gaymens-that turn fem-cause im they simple minded and cant comprehend laymens. I dont hate them.but they hate THE fact that if i dont get paid id still get amens.

uppin

Oh snap!!! That was sweet. That's a lyrical masterpiece right there. It needs no improvement. The wordplay and structure were solid. It had a nice flow to it. It was deep, the theme was original. Keep it up.

THNK YOU

nice read as usual
vocabulary was outstanding the structure worked well within the topic
the beginning of the verse was really tight...

'I'll make your brains take flight like a sparrow-
see an army of militant pharoahs-dethroned by an aramada of primitive arrows.
my mind is a weapon-in seven-i serve blessens, sever revrens, and enemies atop the heavens.
then decend them-while they souls acenden-with another eleven
^like it

and some funny imagery thrown in
shame its being slept on

not bad but words like mathematically etc are played out in the rap game as (quote from Ruttah) the jeri-curl. Hard to read too, maybe if ya cleared it up, and tidied your style, no beef, but then you may win some battles........................................... ..................

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

"the world been keeping the knowledge hostage.
i secreate it to a ink cartridge"
I'm feeling this hadcore shit dawg... lol...
pretty hot with the wordplay and vocab here...
Flow was good...
you spittin raw as usual...
Keep doing your thing man...

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yea your getting better than me..
fuck

ohh yea... ILL AS HELL.... your best iv seen by far
carmen said it best

its thats simple

u got a good vocab its pretty good

good shit and good vocab.holla atcha boy.ill.cold.cold.


CTF(represent)

yo that was an ill drop dude. the wordplay and vocab kicked ass, and the content was amazing. superb drop, i really enjoyed readin that.

yo by the way can u check in to my first song, its called 'back in hell' thanx

peace.....

damn that shit was hot....nice flow, wordplay and vocab....started out great, those first couple of lines really draw you in.....keep droping hotness.....

man... this was very good.... it's like what i expected after i first read your collab with split soul... only problem was when you got to frontlines i was shocked at how bad you are at battling... i'm still confused.... you got the potential don't know why you're at 0-5.... maybe you're just more interested in this sorta thing and dissing people directly isn't for you.... anyway you got skillz.... looks like you been rapping before this net thing.... keep this shit coming.... alot of ya stuff makes good read.... and i like what i seeing.... i hope if you start battling again your technique is able to match your originality and do justice.... keep up o and please if you could make teh structure more
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that'd be dope....

AIGHT LET ME TRY IT NEXT THNK YOU FOR THE FEED BACK BUT THIS PT 2 READ PT ONE