All these power stations polluting the state,generating hate/
Its our fate to annihilate the entire human race/
Races and faces, all these muthafucking racists/
Discriminating is wrong, so what makes us tolerate it?/
We have to pull together our minds to occupate the times/
That we've survived together through our rhymes/
When the twin towers fell, both black and white were killed aswell/
But one nation built up stronger after we'd been through hell/
We helped one another, all for one and one for all/
But after two years this union began to fall/
Now were back to critisising, all hopes of peace are dying/
We need to heal one another but our pride is supersizing/
Blowing us up so we wont associate with others/
Only those with the same colour skin are our real brothers/
What would the Lord say? if he were here to see the pain/
That we put each other through we should all be ashamed/
Lets pull together build a better life for all/
A life were both black and white can ball, and the world will be a better place/
Without this racial hate, why can't we see its up to us to make it great?/

big up y'all, tell me your thoughts on this one.....

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quote........ 'A life were both black and white can ball, and the world will be a better place/
Without this racial hate, why can't we see its up to us to make it great?/'

LMAO.................. these two lines are terrible, some of it was ok
you had some good flow, thought the first 4 lines were the best then it seemed to fade dawg..........................

..........honest comment...............

check out some of my spits, see wot ya is thinkin

Thanks for replying, i guess those last two lines was all about getting rhymes to fit dig? n e way i will read some of your peices, they might teach me a little on how to improve mine.

keep posting y'all

peace and love

it wasnt terrible but alot of amatuer errors are made