35 mins from check in
5 -15 lines
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no quoted votes
no vote swaying
no freeposting
no prewritten
no recycling
no biting
no crew
no hate
no d.r.
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you spit 1st

this is ma check in.............

u were suppose to reply to ur call out ...but ur luckyt i kno wut im doin...n i dont expect much from newbs.......

-AND NO I DONT SPIT 1ST
- it was ur call out so u spit 1st learn the rules...1

I posted in my call out that whoever accepted had to spit first and you posted a reply saying you were down. Meaning you agreed with the rules so either go first or there'll be no battle. What's it gonna be?

fine penis.............but u got 20 min after i drop......1

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In The end this kid wit "NO" votes.. wit one verse he says X his hero/
Single now? He will be progressing left wit negative's till he gets back to ZERO/

this man's a magician..he makes L's appear in any situation/
I'd say your to rhymes stink like garbage but that'd be an Overstatement/

this is a set up bar ok..ya lyrics was garbage their Lack Luster/
Ya rhymes are like houses with no Foundation..They lack Structure/

You beat me, like Unregitered Corpses your death Has no Meaning/
Like old men ma lines Overexceeding, my punches laced with Rogaine the way ya First Lines receeding/

You ever winnin was hopeless, Im endin this battle without regards, I have spoken/
You could give brains to Smokey the Bear and ya spits still couldnt be Smokin/

Ok, nice spit dogg. Checkin in...
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This bitch is gonna recieve his 27th defeat, quicker than my body produces kinetic heat/
X Ecution gets shit on more than a toilet seat, couldn't amaze me if he performed an acrobadic feat//
I'll never cook this beef cause I like my meat raw, motherfucker couldn't control me if he had his own law/
This dude is bisexual with a concealed bra, answerin' to my call out will be his fatal flaw//
X Ecution will get executed from the rhymes I spewted, he has no presence like his mouth's muted/
When this bitch spits the rap game becomes polluted, he belongs to the herb crew...waitin' to be recruited//
Be prepared to get hit with my planned attack, i'll burn you quicker than your cd-burner can write the track/
Yeah! I'ma fuck you up worse than an elite hack, this guy couldn't write a dark verse if he waited till pitch black//
Your finisher has been played time and time again, how do you expect that to earn you your 50th win?/
Your soft within and you're wearin' thin, the truth is his flow wouldn't be double mine if he had an identical twin//

UPPIN 4 VOTES (1)!
Note: No "I'm gonna vote for this guy because he has more post votes" cause I see that a lot.

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very nice...battle....................aight listen

mm=hard,creative punches and also some nice personals.......lines were a littla stretched but the flow was still good

xecution=again hard punches and nice flow but i think ya underestimated this guy too much

overall=mm...........nice battle ya'll.........i jus felt mm's verse a lot more

BREAKDOWN:

X Ecution:
In The end this kid wit "NO" votes.. wit one verse he says X his hero/
Single now? He will be progressing left wit negative's till he gets back to ZERO/

-First line was filler, second line was nice

this man's a magician..he makes L's appear in any situation/
I'd say your to rhymes stink like garbage but that'd be an Overstatement/

-First line with that "L" bit is played beyond belief, Second line was flat out weak

this is a set up bar ok..ya lyrics was garbage their Lack Luster/
Ya rhymes are like houses with no Foundation..They lack Structure/

-Once again two played lines (bar/houses/foundation/structure)

You beat me, like Unregitered Corpses your death Has no Meaning/
Like old men ma lines Overexceeding, my punches laced with Rogaine the way ya First Lines receeding/

-First line was nice, Second line was a nice punch

You ever winnin was hopeless, Im endin this battle without regards, I have spoken/
You could give brains to Smokey the Bear and ya spits still couldnt be Smokin/

-I'm so tired of these finishers about things you could do, eat, drink etc. but it wouldn't enhance your flow


MMESS:
This bitch is gonna recieve his 27th defeat, quicker than my body produces kinetic heat/
X Ecution gets shit on more than a toilet seat, couldn't amaze me if he performed an acrobadic feat//

-First line was dope as HELL, and the second line back it up

I'll never cook this beef cause I like my meat raw, motherfucker couldn't control me if he had his own law/
This dude is bisexual with a concealed bra, answerin' to my call out will be his fatal flaw//

-Both lines very creative and well put together

X Ecution will get executed from the rhymes I spewted, he has no presence like his mouth's muted/
When this bitch spits the rap game becomes polluted, he belongs to the herb crew...waitin' to be recruited//

-First line very ILL, second line still has me laughin

Be prepared to get hit with my planned attack, i'll burn you quicker than your cd-burner can write the track/
Yeah! I'ma fuck you up worse than an elite hack, this guy couldn't write a dark verse if he waited till pitch black//

-First line once again was nice, second line sort of fell off

Your finisher has been played time and time again, how do you expect that to earn you your 50th win?/
Your soft within and you're wearin' thin, the truth is his flow wouldn't be double mine if he had an identical twin//

-First line was filler, second line was HOT

Overal:
I'm givin my vote to MMESS for creativity, wordplay, originality, and punchlines i've never seen played before
VOTE = MMESS

Thank for the votes y'all.
Currently MMESS 2; X Ecution 0

Oh and J. Dubya, how do you get that victims column under your name?

UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!! (2)

Cryptic:

Punches: M
Flow: M
Multi: X
Structure: X
Enjoyability: Both
Vocab: Both
Personals: Both

Vote-M

This was a nice battle, I loved all of the punches, very nice indeed. I voted for M because of course Flow and Punches are the kets ro winning battles, Props.

Note: X if I see any of you fucked up d/r votes, they are begin reported.

Vote on this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80975

fuck u ^...........ur just pissed u lost n how i is it d/r......shut up

god just cause i beat u dont mean u gotta shit all over ma verses in other battles.........i think that vote should be taken away...

w/e............... more votes....1

good battle both of your'll

if i could vote i think MMESS would take it
he had me laughing

good battle both of your'll

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