Now What I'm Still On Top I'll Never Fall


Dudes knew I was a problem when I had exit the womb,
I was destined to rap, one of God's blessings consumed.
I promote violence, it’s silent cuz my lyrics is lethal,
You're nothing like me, your flow and my spirit aint equal.
So try me, It's a dynasty with war outside,
clash with this titan, fighting for a chance to survive,
I stride, head high, with my gun tucked,
Swing my sword like nun chucks,
That’s enough
Read the fine print,
I’m god sent,
But my content’s too explicit to be nonsense,
Born with chrome and clothes, I’m known to blow,
The explosion’ll have your bones exposed.

O'Kay O'Kay

...You need to even the lengths of your bars but your vocab was nice and also make the content longer with more meaning behind
lines...but no this was a good piece...Just keep at it

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Dont make a poll to your open mic threads, they arent allowed.
if you want, re-post just the verse in a new thread, but dont make a poll with it.

sorry bro, im just doing my job here.

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