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Old 09-24-03, 07:34 PM   #1
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I think this is an improvement on my first audio,learnt alot from Unique Expression and i think this one is worth a listen.Experimenting with it and i think it has better sound quality.Tinkering still required but give me some feedback,

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Old 09-24-03, 07:39 PM   #2
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Wheres the link
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Old 09-24-03, 07:48 PM   #3
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It's there.
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Old 09-24-03, 09:14 PM   #4
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Any Feedback ?

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Old 09-25-03, 09:46 AM   #5
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20 views no feed ?

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Old 09-25-03, 02:17 PM   #6
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Come on dawgs drop some feed.

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Old 09-25-03, 03:18 PM   #7
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considerable improvement from last one
although for the first minute u seemed to be stumbling over the verses..kinda mumbled
but after that u became alot clearer...good job
beat was decen too..kinda laid back
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Old 09-25-03, 03:36 PM   #8
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it sounded good,,but i couldn't understand what you was saying at times,,you got deep though,,it was more like poetry..
but it was cool..
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Old 09-25-03, 03:42 PM   #9
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cool thanx,it's the accaent lol Scottish man,but thanks
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Old 09-25-03, 03:58 PM   #10
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You're mumbling a lot, try to speak clearer and annunciate. .
From what I can tell, flow is decent for the most part, off at times, but overall good.
Delivery and emotion could both use some work, but both will come when you become more comfortable on the mic. .
Can't really comment on the lyrics, because I couldn't really hear any. .
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Old 09-25-03, 04:18 PM   #11
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^Harsh,don't know why u couldn't hear,but i know what u mean about tha mumbling,it's my shitty mic.

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Old 09-25-03, 04:29 PM   #12
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^ I'm just trying to help you elevate, not trying to be a dick about it.
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Old 09-25-03, 04:31 PM   #13
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it's cool i jus wondered why u can't hear it,it sounds fine.

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Old 09-25-03, 05:23 PM   #14
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^ I'm saying that your vocals were so mumbled, I couldn't make out what you were saying half the time.
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Old 09-25-03, 05:44 PM   #15
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ahh fair enough alls i'm sayin is it may just be you.Maybe not though.
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