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Old 09-25-03, 12:34 AM   #1
Smooth JT
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What is so special about me

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As I sit and stare at this screen deep in thought I think about what makes me me. What makes JT so special?? Nothing comes to mind as i sit and cry wanting to run far far away. People come to me and ask me about stuff and for help. How can i help you if i can't even help myself. i relize tears of pain and confusion run down my cheeks. why me? why me?? What is so special about me??? Keep thinking and think till I over heat myself and faint................. what makes me me............????..............????........

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Old 09-25-03, 12:36 AM   #2
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this reminds me alot of something i did called Accpetance

i liked the way it flowed and i got the image you were trying to convey, well done JT

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Old 09-25-03, 01:24 PM   #3
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ummm.. that is interestin 2 say the
least, its a decent ventin piece

i really dun know wtf 2 say, ya vocab needs
work, emotion is nice.. so is the imagery, the
flow is off, keep workin on it 1
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Old 09-25-03, 01:37 PM   #4
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Having a huge vocab was not necessary here. You got your point across just fine. Who cares how many syllables was in it..

Anyways, I thought you had a good question in this. I got to thinking about it and I don't know what makes me me, either Parts of it looked like a whine to me. Didn't really like that part but that's just...me. One of those thought provoking ones. Not bad at all.
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Old 09-25-03, 02:12 PM   #5
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Needed to vent and i was really confused, Yea it was kinda of a whine like yelling that out. I have better. Need some more opinions on "A woman" so please have a look see or jus cheak out my other work, peace
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