24 lines max
U spit first
No d/r votes, o hate etc

Peace

peep the verse

its time, when your battle record falls
i'll lyrically kill you, with a reasonable cause
u want me to spit first, bitch i'll kill you wit my curse
plus more crimes been charged on the written, instead of the verse
i'll expose the real bitch, i'll make you lift up your skirt
your flow is ugly, like ya face, when you was dropped at birth
the words are a virus, they jus be too contagious
you aint never dropped hot shit, except when it comes out ur anus
this aint for the weak, it only makes me humble
you rhyme makes me pissed, like tiki barber losin a fumble
look what you wrote, its not even half of what i be spitten
but we all know you, cuz that shit was already pre-written
if i wasnt a noobie, then you'd probably lose
i heard you was a catholic priest, but i aint a kid jus to be abused
the flow was deep, it kept me from being the lyrical scripture
i'll make you remember this battle, even if i developed a picture
im like a fiend, my rhymes have become so dependant
your flow looks enclosed, its like its apprehended
i pick up the dust and startin smoking the bud
i aint a gangsta, but i spill more red than a blood
i once killed a kid lyrically, then i fled
but i aint got to fuck u up twice, cuz i did that already on ya sista's bed

sorry for the freepost but crypt clean out your mailbox
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This battles like That guy in dragon fly, "U Lost it" now in Denial......."Scolastic" should make a book bout you, "Dumbass tries to FreeStyle/"
(other books-mummy playes soccer, dracula drinks lemonaid)

U dont suck cuz u Rusty its cuz you still a Rookie......I know a wussy so Like "Nips" I'll "Boil and Eat this Pussy"/
(chinese eat cats)

Ur a load of crap, bigger than Jurassic Park Dinosaur Shit-Piles.......U couldnt survive this Heat if u were a Desert Livin Reptile/

Ur like glue and cum shots, my spews "Stick" ta your "Face".........J's Verse was like Osama Bin Laden, All over the Damn Place/

U kinda like internet cables down Nuthin u say ever Connects........Stepin to the mic you'd choke, thats why u battle Text/

My lyrics are "Too much to handle" like kids wathcin a Film X-Rated..........U like JK Experiments on TV, being X'ed but also Sterminaded/


Thats all i need i think

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both of those verse were iight J-man your shit is to basic you need to elevate that shit and crypt's was sick he had good vocab flow punches basically everything kinda one sided good battle

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lmao............ ur veres made me laugh crypt

good battle i think crypt came harder


lol at crypt battlin newbies...... watch about your stretched lines though

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Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

Pretty good battle, but i think Crypt came harder in about everything, he had better punches and flow was better i thought, so my vote goes to Crypt

lol at remix



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not really feelin any of you really

punches=CRyp
flow=j
wordplay=CRyp
vocab=CRYP
multis=tie

overall cryp took this one barelly

vote CRYP

to really think of it i liked jman better..............fucker surprised me cuz hes a newbie and he put up some mean comp.........i like the way his shit flowed man it was sick......

vote=>jman

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I think Crypt won, basically too classy for this guy.................

Vote:crypt


hit this up and repay the favour

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

aight cryp won but i will still break it down

flow even
multi's cryp
wordplay cryp
punchs cryp
complexity cryp
structure cryp
both spit very well just cryp had the upper hand and hit this shit up honestly nigga's aight


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