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KeyStyle

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Lookin At My Self, Am I That Guy In The Mirror?
Holdin Back Emotions Only Showin In My Interior
I Worry About Little Petty Stuff Thats Inferior
Tryna Speed Up Judgment By The Surperior
Depressed Cuz Nuthin Matters And All My Dreams Shatter
Right Before My Eyes Like They Were Served on A Platter
Negative Thoughts Lead To Irrational Actions
And Everything Sux, So Shit Nucca, Whats Happnin
My Minds Had Problems Since My Beggining
Like A Tree, They Start At A Seed And Start Stemming
Pad And Pen To Vent And Repent On Bad Judgment
But Venting And Repenting Dopley Is Gods Compliments....

Just A Short Sumin Sumin...

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Nawfik's Out, Back To Chi...........

it has come to my attention
"Mirror?
Holdin Back Emotions Only Showin In My Interior" unless u say
mirror and inti-rar, or miri-ar and interior

fuckin wackness, elivate homo rhymer, that made no sense
and went no where please stop with your keystles, spit about
an acutal topic next time, u had no flow, no orgianl style,
no originaly actually ur the original herb of the day, baHHHH
ur pissin me off get to detention, fuckin hell bah PLEASE READ
MY TEXT NEXT TIEM SPIT ON A FUCKIN TOPIC NOT JUST URSELF
GET IT GOT IT NOW FUCKIN DO IT????!?!?!?!?!???!?!?


GOT SKILLZ???? I DONT THINK SO FUCKIN HOMO

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81857

^^^ dunno where this fucker learned to talk but mirror and interior do rhyme.... still this piece lacked a topic its flow was rather weak, still rhymes where half ways decent, elevate dunnie elevate

^^ LoL You Just Called Me Dunnie, I Was Well Blunted..I Dont Care About It.. Its A Drop I Did Cuz I Gottta Have My Name In The Forum

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DejaVu


Nawfik's Out, Back To Chi...........

Fuck What That Guy Said I Thought This Was A Pretty Decent Drop For A Keystyle You Keyed Up A Walk Into Your Mind And That Was Pretty Good I Liked It..


holla back..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=80328
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81425

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Yeah this peice was good, it was a pretty good read i thought too, your flow was ok, pretty good content you had, and it was a alright concept, overall id say it was a pretty good drop, keep dropping and if you get the chance check out my peice called first day of school, much appreciated, thanks.

Mirror?
Holdin Back Emotions Only Showin In My Interior" unless u say
mirror and inti-rar, or miri-ar and interior

mirror and interior doesnt rhyme cock jockey

Whos Accent Are You Using?

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DejaVu
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DejaVu


Nawfik's Out, Back To Chi...........

this was an aiight drop. Your flow and content was straiight but like everyone else said GET A TOPIC NEXT TIME!!! But its all good this was a keystyle anyways so w/e w/e......keep elivate'n, 1

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" So for the 2nd time [The Pharisses] summoned the man who had been blind and said
"Speak the truth before God. We know this man is a sinner."
"Wether he is a sinner I do not know."
:The man replied:
"All I know is this...Once I was blind and now I can see"
John 1x 24-26