im in a Sea of Trouble & my Heart's Sinking to the Bottom
Seaing Plenty of Fish w/ their insides Cold, Dead & Rotten
Swiming thru Hostile Waters & the Sharks are Watching
Plottin to Bait me on thier Hook.. Dating Pockets & Looks
Taking what im Rocking & Drop it inside their Pocket-Books
these Good Looking Crooks will Clock every Cranny & Nook
Watch as my understanding is Shook, then Shaken off its Axis
cause in the Game of Life.. i've been Taking Off from Practice
i'm Perfectly fine w/ Perfect Imperfections of my Actions
& for those Directing Dollar Signs
that wasn't in my Contract OR My Coming Attractions
Acting as if my Cash Flow Runs Deep.. Cut & see the reality
it is actually, as Shallow as each of these Bitches' Personalities
thier life is an obvious Fallacy.. Floating in an open Ocean of Lies
hopin rich men Drown in their Waves.. just to Change the Tide
Wading inside are Red, Black, Brown & Dirty Blonds
Hiding thier Intentions as they Lurk in a Secretive Murky Pond
then attack like Leaches & attach thier Thirsty Tenticles On
& then it goes on..
so before it reaches that point.. be prepared before they appear
let them know they are just Bodies Of Water
& you Sea right Thru Them... its Crystal Clear

YOU MONEY HUNGRY, GOLD DIGGING, DIAMOND INCRUSTED BEEOTTCHES!!!
GET A JOB......... BLOW

Hahahaha at the end, lol.
This was pretty good though, stuck to the topic nicely, flow was ok, could of used a couple more internals to keep it tighter, it seemed to slip a little towards the middle but picked back up at the latter stage, ok imagery and such, all in all i liked.

not bad my man.

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This was a good peice, i thought it was a good read also, your flow was pretty good, you had good content as well, you stayed on topic and didnt stray from it really, overall id say this was a good peice, keep dropping.

Thanks... Much Appreciated.. Any More

yeah...this shit was dope...flow was there and vocab was good...but you came better against me...

^^ what they said
flow, multis were your best
internals, vocab close 2nd

i can see why you are in SS (that is a league right?)

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81665

Well... Thanks

Dope piece...Flow was ill to me...Dope wordplay...Consistent...Nice twist...Keep it up...Peace

Good to have you back Mentill

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