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09-26-03, 01:43 PM
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Banned
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I'm A What?!?!?(The Omens)
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CarsonJet......-2k4 that is....
here u are.... Im a What?..... Well.... Lets start it off about dis story bout CJ- One morning upon wakening up I noticed I was sportin new parts- works of art,I felt a lil extra tissue bustin up from da heart- I felt the need ta grab.....'holy shit 36'c's...what up wit these?- An look my knees!...burnt up like dey been branded wit 100 degrees- Damn...Look at me...how did this happen? Im a college caucasian tease!- please....If im here now....I might as well enjoy da' festivities- so...... Carson straps'on da Bra-an what da fuk?o hell naw- Carson aint slippin in that...it'll floss his ass raw!- How dese bitches'fit in dese heels my feet aint shaped like that?- spaghetti straps!?..fuk that-them shoe'laces aint gon hold my rack- So i throw en ensamble an hit the streets'in searcha lesbo love- News flash'I check my snatch an would u bet?...a bloody dove- fuk this stuff-...... What did i do to reincarnate a bitch on the rag- I feel like a C in drag- embarrased'.....now look my tities sagg'd- |
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09-26-03, 04:47 PM
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Banned: Compromised Account
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IP:
lol...I don't think I ever heard of nobody rhymin' about bein' reincarnated as a bitch...this shit was madd creative son...and a coupla parts had me laughin' too...keep reppin' the fam to the fullest CJ...
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09-26-03, 06:37 PM
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Word.
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IP:
Yeah this was a pretty good peice i thought, it was a good read as well, you had good flow, the concept was good, and your content was good also, Overall id say it was a pretty good peice, keep dropping.
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09-27-03, 02:15 AM
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Guest
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IP:
I KNEW YOU WERE THE PERFECT PERSON FOR HIS TOPIC TWIN I KNEW IT AND IM HARDLY EVER WRONG HIT ME IF YOU WANT MORE LIKE THIS......
YOU DID ABOVE WHAT I EXPECTED. |
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09-27-03, 02:17 AM
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Banned 4 biting
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IP:
This was decent drop,flow was there.You stayed on topic,try some multis,metties,vocab and bar structure and you'll be okay.Keep dropping kid,1
If you'd be so kind,drop a vote: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=81757 |
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09-27-03, 12:20 PM
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Banned
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str8....i say i did mediocre on dis....i coulda done betta'.....
thanks fer feedbak...pc*1* |
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09-27-03, 09:12 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP:
good piece...very weird topic..well not weird just unespected..but great to read..for summin like this i give you 9/10..keep it up
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09-27-03, 09:14 PM
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#8
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BANNED: Cheater
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IP:
yo nice shit............keep yo head up
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