aight nigga, 10 lines, no d/r, crewe votes etc, check in and i'll spit within half an hour

I'm in. Just waitin for your verse now. Let's get this started. I'll spit after you. Just give some time to think bout it.

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

aight check this out

So I lost my pulse and came got reincarnated as a prophecy/

I came back here to beat your ass, cuz your destined to get a bigger loss count than me/

Im gonna drag you from here to infinity, ima torture your soul like the spirit of Satan lives in me/

Im gonna split your soul in two, like deaths scythe splittin right through you/

And then I’ll see you in hell cuz murders a crime, this plays on my conscience, but doesn’t effect my rhymes/

Tho this will make you stutter, you’ll neva b the same and end up joinin your family livin down the drain/

And that’s where your shit belongs, you’ve been tryin for years now but still getting it all wrong/

This is cuz your fucked up, you should be in a mental hospital, cuz the amount of your brain sells matches the size of your dick – its hardly noticeable/

But its okay I’ve come to lead my forces against your weakness, so you’ll be with your ability, you’ll be deceased next/

So now Ima put your R.I.P, Rappin In Perspective, into the winners style you’ve just been rejected/

spit when your ready, tho try not to take too long, peace out.............................................

I've run out of time. I've gotta go. We'll battle another time. PM me when ya wanna battle and we'll get set up again

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

Fuck it. I'm gonna hit back before i go.

So you have the cheek to say i've been rejected/
what are you...dislexic?/
If i've been rejected then goodbye you've just been ejected/

My words can be mistaken for hexes (curses)/
You can't dodge them coz you've got no relexes/

You say your conscience doesn't affect your rhymes/
Somethin does coz what your doin is committin lyrical crimes

You really do think your some kind of gangsta/
Don't play yourself your just a pranksta ya fuckin wanksta/

Does the dj in your name stand for dick jockey/
Coz on first impressions I think you play testicle hockey

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

ill vote in this battle after you drop a quick vote in this shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78589

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"My intelligence begins where yours peaks at" ~Canibus

C'mon people vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect

uppin for votes............................................. ..............................................

both yall could use some elevation...dj pulse had some iight set up for his punches, but they did'nt connect well...kinda soft..you had a touch of wordplay..a lil creativeness...disseswere ight..overall you had maybe two barz that came nice...the rest was basic...

LM verse fed...most peeps would say thats a no no...still you did'nt do that to good...your punches were lackluster...very elementary...disses were so so...weak opener...

both bout even but pulse showed a lil skills...vote dj

cheers dawg, uppin for votes............................................. ........................................

punches - DJ
Flow - LM
Rhymescheme - LM
Creativity - DJ
On point - DJ
Multis - DJ
Similies - LM

Look, DJ and LM didn't spit hard at all, you two both need to elevate on ya flow and rhymescheme/ punches n similies.

DJ - Work on your flow, it was hard as hell for me to follow, your lines stretched from small to even larger... so just work on that, punches are also something you need to get a hold of man...

LM - Work on every aspect dawg... you fell off in all the parts... multis, flow, punches, simis, metas blah blah blah... you didn't come that hard at all, next time, try attackin' your oppenent dawg

vote - DJ

dj puilse takes this shit......
he had a better flow and sum good lyrics......
he flowed nice as well.........

vote = dj pulse

Peace.............................Fiori

uppin for votes............................................. ..............................................

I have to give to Dj Pulse
This is how I am going to lay it out...
Flow = DJ
Structure = Equal
Multi's = Not enough to make a decision
Meta's = Same as above
Creativity = DJ
Overall = DJ also LM Fed off the other person rap but because the didn't state no feedin then I guess I couldn't take that to account for my decision