Im confused between the interlude of earths rooms
Confused between reality and illusion's worst moves
Boxing match, Toxic attacks against the illusionist
Sniffing coke on piano notes, smell the music
Red Queen running feet, my destiny is beneath me
I walk through seas and swim deep beneath concrete
Escape from clock prison, im running outta time
Religion on crop fields, I follow the farmers signs
Hold brains above coffins, im thinking outside the box
Im frozen between the sun's orbit forces blind equinox
My physical frame is restrained in the spheres corner
Mystical shape size shifting titan lifting light morpher
Running the backdoors, Im trying to grab the endless corriders
But my senses fall, through every door opened to its lure
Whats the point, we're all chased by the grim reaper
If I cant step in the immortals portal, you cant either
People of today, just run around on the governments square
People of today, dont think at first, and get hurt, all peared
The worlds gone pear shaped, we all living in a fruit bowl
Our questions get answered in question untill we get old
And sitting here I wonder, on a day, nice summer
What will this exact location be in the far future




"And the place they call there blessings, and the place they call all sufferings, and the storys of them placed in, is placed in the mind to be placed into bondage - ????? "

i hate to doing this.

please reply a decent reply

uppin this

this is some poem man but
sniffing coke on a piano can u smell the music

^^^gay^^^

i hate one liners replies.

CAMARAC

sort this geek out, he constantly does one liners

dip u wack ad mit it now

your getting banned

I guess I'm the only one so far that can appreciate a good piece lol. That was deep. You had good structure, and it flowed nicely I think. You have good wordplay. "Hold brains above coffins, im thinking outside the box" that was sick! I liked that line the best. All in all, it was a good solid piece. Keep it up.

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What the fuck is this?

thanx for the decent reply, still upping for this

please stop sleeping on this.