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Old 09-28-03, 04:23 PM   #1
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Reflections ft/ Bruklor

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Bruk then me.

I search relentlessly for a panel to channel insight-
My shirt of skin protects my souls axel from everyone in sight-
My heart of my sleeve for the rows to see-
Depression ricochets like blue between the sky and the sea-
Learnt a lesson the day I purchased a reflection at the garage sale-
Useless to those who use brail for detection, like a four-way wind barrage on a sail-
When my shadow saw whom he was following, I was left abandoned-
So I can focus on my mirrors output, my broken glasses have a band on them-
Before you meet the one that wrote us all, hope you've given life some reflection-
Notice that every bars ending rhyme, are all mirrored by a shady reflection-

Life's a reflection, its the visible truth of scriptures
But is it pointless, If viewed through a shattered mirror
Whats the picture, if your look disguises your intelligence
'Cuz if ignore stereotypes, the remaks would be irrelevant
Compel to excellence, as I begin to conquer perfection
As the truth ressurects, due to the truth of reflection
And its mearly my self image, and it's only mine to learn
But when I die, then all my fans and enemies, can have their turn
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Old 09-28-03, 04:33 PM   #2
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haha, bruk had a nice verse

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Before you meet the one that wrote us all, hope you've given life some reflection-
Notice that every bars ending rhyme, are all mirrored by a shady reflection-


haha, i only just noticed this untill u sed this

termz came off the flow hard

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Whats the picture, if your look disguises your intelligence
'Cuz if ignore stereotypes, the remaks would be irrelevant


thats so true, people just follow other people, we're always following each other.

nice creative shit from both of you.
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Old 09-28-03, 05:13 PM   #3
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Ahhhhh, i replied to this indepth at RnR or RV, id rather not again, lol, i liked it though, short and to the point, styles worked well together, all in all not a bad collab.

Uppin' for him. .
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Old 09-28-03, 10:04 PM   #4
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yea i agree wit camarac that wasnt a bad collab, the wordplay and vocab were good by both, the flow was on target in both verses, the content and topic were both original, props to both of ya, keep postin guys i enjoyed readin that.

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Old 09-29-03, 04:25 AM   #5
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yeah this was a good peice, and it was a good read i thought, the wordplay was good along with the vocab, the content was good, and your flows was good also, overall id say it was a good peice.
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