I'm in a state of depression...but I show laughter to hide the pain...
still the final chapter of life remains...but thoughts of ending my life story are captured inside my brain...
my heart's broken from being fractured by childish games...
playin' with my mind cause no matter how many public recordz I've sold I still can't find a name...
sometimes I ask myself..."Tomas...when will you die?????"
I feelin' deprived...cause people tell me they love me to death...but what doez it mean when I'm still feelin' alive...
I feel as if there's no escapin' the curse...of life until I lay in a hearst...
if I could take back one day in my life...it would be the date of my birth...
go head...take my pride...I'm used to the pain...
take my knife and cut right through to the vein until I leak like fuselage drains...
I wanna take my right hand and hold a knife to my throat...
cause death has gotta be the punchline if life is a joke...
I hide in the smoke...that emits from a single blast from a tech...
I'm thinkin' after my death...people may finally have some respect...
I glanced at her beauty...deep into each otherz eye'z we had looked...
that's when I realized...that there are alwayz 2 sides to a book...
she was sitting next to me crying...watching as I bleed from my head...
I said "you were my reason for living...but now you're the reason I'm dead..."

The multies were there. Good structure. It had a flow to it. "I feelin' deprived..cause people tell me they love me to death..but what doez it mean when I'm still feelin' alive" I liked that line the most. That was deep. I liked it. Keep dropping.

__________________
What the fuck is this?

The multies were there. Good structure. It had a flow to it. "I feelin' deprived..cause people tell me they love me to death..but what doez it mean when I'm still feelin' alive" I liked that line the most. That was deep. I liked it. Keep dropping.

__________________
What the fuck is this?

^^^awww...ya gotta post twicw for me...I feel special...

lol...didn't realize i did that...but if it makes you feel special then yeah, cause your verse was that nice. =)

__________________
What the fuck is this?

naw she did that cause nobody would belive she actually ment that....lol king stay off my woman..............
this was mad solid i loved the agression the lesson taught and thought.......composition was well thought.....
keep practicing maybe one day your name will properly fit in a sentence with mine....

^^^Lmao...I'm dope...ya still at like low tar cigarette level...

can I buy a vowel...

uhhh...uppin'...

this was an ill piece,nice multis, nice wordplay, very deep subject, personal emotional pieces are always a gateway to tha inside of an emcees talent. over all this was tight drop, keep droppin tha hotness.~1~

thanks...don't you wish you were as dope as me...lol...j/k...but this shit has been gettin' slept on...