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Chek In's Due: Wendesday 10/01/03
Verse's Due: Friday 10/03/03

checking in.

Sup Cam. ?

Like taking ya net pics.. i'll end your life on the web, cam!
im squashing ya flow, like a fat guy sat on ya head, damn
he's mad.. while he trys his hardest, only to lose & fail
cuz cam's got PMS..... and i dont mean rb user mail!
i refuse to fail, & hes held back & mad at me. . .
cuz the only thing that can hold me down.. is gravity
be glad to me, i still haven't wanted to get on ya crew
but the fact that your in one.. is just getting on you
stay mad at me, for bein better, while u delay ya verse
why didnt you go yet? i thought it was ladies first...

go hoe. and you hoes had better have gotten some of my punches, or i will beat myself.

okay checking in................. nice verse............................................. ...............

FM chicks givin me brain while he's working on his wordgame!
Ran game now the chicks called conductor cuz she's the one who runs train
Ya rhyme blows, if you're the head of the Omens, they must all be hoes
The leader prewrites and has bad flow, dissin my crew and I'm going solo
The truth is exposed fm know he gave it his all and still i'm above ya
Fuck a callout, gunshots make ya teeth fallout like they fightin each other
I know where 2 begin, take on his crew and fm once more to beat him again
Well at least I'd take on FM, i'd go after his crew but i never heard of them
He says "Sup Cam" you show me luv like I'm your cuz, fuck it I've had enough
I can't be affiliated with Feeble Minded's punches.... or the lack thereof

Close battle here...

I think Feeble took it though, he had some nice punchlines as well as personals....Good wordplay also...Cam U had a nice verse but u also fed off of Feeble verse, and still came up a little short on ya punches....U need to shorten them bars up a lil more also, dont take it personally, its just some constructive critisicm

Vote = Feeble

this kid just dickrode me evolve, take away his vote.
i used to talk to him over aim all the time. then found out hes known for dickriding. i dont want his vote.

still 0-0.

hoes. dont dickride for anybody.

edited:

next week cant i get a title shot evolve?
been in LLL forever and never gotten even a lightweight shot.
ill prove myself worthy if i do.

0-0... Feeble doesn't want that one to count for himself...

BUT.. in the future if this kid votes against you or something.. dont
tell me not to count it... cause he has a rite to vote

Feeble Minded had better punches...Better wordplay and better flow.....overall...better everything

I thought Cameron's verse was extremely boring.........Sorry but I did.....

My vote=Feeble Minded

1-0 to FM

Aight Feeble took this...

Solid verse...
Much better than last week...
Takes it with better punches etc.

Vote- Feeble

Vote Feeble

Cam's was boring as hell... very dull.. nothing really exciting at
all

Feeble's was better ... had a few witty punches... just overall
better than Cam's

VOTE - FEEBLE

Feeb Came Much Harder Than Cam . . . Too Much Self-Hype Nd Shit In Cam's Verse...Feeble Had Better Flow, Punches Nd Werdplay..

One-Sided

yea feeble got this 1.....he stayed consistent.....

throughout his verse....he had some decent punches.....

some played.....better wordplay......CAM u came pretty weak......

and also pretty boring.....feeble just had a overall better verse.....

so my vote goes to feeble.......

yep..
pz....

feeble took this easily...

Cam like bazzy said...ur verse is boring...

feeble had better punches and a better flo....he had the overall better verse

Vote-Feeble

feeble took this
verse was the best ive seen from him
wordplay was pretty dope...hit cams verse back around the block...
just had alot more good punches in there capped with wordplay
cams didnt really have much impact