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you first
no crew, pussy ridin, or hate votes....

now get along little darlin'

aight checkin in before i spits









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Your back`ll~split after my raps~hit gag~this~kid
Your `shits killin me worse` than if I `overdosed on laxatives`
I pak lead~n~gagues~bitch; leave u dead~n~shameless~bitch
I `stimulate` tha crowd more than `foreplay` wit Jenna~Jameson
I possess the ill skills, to make this kid joint~less
I enjoy~this, like `broken pencils` battlin me is `point~less`
I`ll smash on ya dome, then proceed to cut~ya~guts
`Smashin acorns` is the only way this faggot `busts~a~nut`
I`ll squash this lizard in infinite ways, hard tryin~ta~choose~one
Cuz tha crowds `lost faith` in u surviving, like `prostitute nuns`

aight girl, let me have it....


then I'll give it to you good....................................
haha

whoa you already spit, ok here I go................................................ ..........................................

haha damn gurl that was pretty tight verse......props ill hit this up when he spits and i bet u would give it to her if u could chameleon

look at her name this herb is a lame
you should be wearin a choke chain in your pic cause your a bitch mary jane
you probably got a big hairy thang.... ho shave your cooch
while your at it go buy some purfume and a humungous deuche
I'm puttin this bitch to sleep, she probably got a tat on her ass sayin fits 2 feet
she doesn't rap on mic's, she takes naps with dykes sportin crochless tights
the only punches she makes are with lezbians havin vaginal fist fights
nice pic, why don't you buy a brush chick, practice flowin and stop suckin dick
quick, someone call a medic, the girl needs a nose job her face is pathetic
fuck it, your too ugly just get a sex change and call yourself fredrick

damn gurls, that was tight, but ima give this to mary jane, let me break this down from my point of view....

flow-tie
structure-tie
punches-mary
personals-chameleon
wordplay-mary
vocab-tie
overall-mary

good battle, props to the both of ya, but mary jane took this

yo if u have the time can post a reply on this open mic, its gettin badly slept on...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82558
thanx

peace.....

uppin
nippu
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IM GOIN W/ MARY JANE... BETTER FLOW AND PUNCHES.. CHAMELEON HAD MORE PERSONALS BUT I DONT KNO.. SOME OF IT SEEMED PLAYED... PROPS TO BOTH
VOTE=MJ

hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82560

This was a hot battle both came out swinging and i liked both verses but the person with the more wittier punches came from..

My vote - MJ..
This is what took it


Props to both though 1..

GO MARY JANE!!!!!

GO GO SHAWTY ITS YA B-DAY!!!!!


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lolz thx but it aint my BDAY YET!!!!!

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this is not goin well for me
this sucks
and I just wanted to say that I'm not a girl to that guy who called me one
I'm far from it, nah mean!!!!
haha

up and at them I guess

uh oh move over slik and hottie a new femcee is takin over!

flow-aint really a flow but blah
personals-cham(he talked bout ya sig)
humor-cham
metaphors-mj
multiples-mj
worplay-mj
punches-mj
creativity-cham
complexity-mj
structure-neither they both were kinda stretched...KINDA!!
overall-mary jane

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