10 liens

both drops in by 11

check in

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this is ma check in im not droppin till i get a check in from u.......

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Sorry man was out; cheaking in..

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No use to protect your reputation; because it was never there;
only time X battles a vet; is when the warlords truth or DARE.
Your nothing but fair; wont touch another win; not till after this;
if X marks the spot; then my verse just made a full contact hit.
People used to think highley of you; till they new your wins were fake;
& you really need to remove the list; so theres room for me in your loss space.
Here's a comment; your verse was smashing; like it got in an accident;
were you dropped on your head as an infant?! because it made whack indents.
Letting your self go poor; so wellfare will hand out some wins for the needy;
i'll leave your whole crew bleeding; havent you got enough wins; with me your gettin greedy.

Uppin this battle for X to drop; you already DQ'd..

I dont know what your going to do; cus I dropped by 11 pm..

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Uppin for you X; I dropped by the time limit - dont no show after all; I did make the dead line; dont be a punk!

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sry didnt kno u posted here i go!
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I bomb with animosity at rocket speed velocity/
I speak philosophy, you couldn’t put two words together with apostrophes/

I'll Tear Ya purpose down, you tried to be funny and got booed by circus clowns/
Drop ya purses now, buying boxin’ tickets is the only time you purchased rounds/

Everything you say to me means dick, cuz you always got cock in ya face/
Fool I’ll put ya eyes in ya mouth and make you "watch what you say"/

You wanna claim to be the best but I never heard of you, this clowns a mystery/
Givin head in the back of class is the only way you goin down in history/

I’m lyrically benevolent slaughter foes with malevolence/
If your rap was Murder they’d only find a lack of evidence/

Alright This how I am going to break it down...

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No use to protect your reputation; because it was never there;
only time X battles a vet; is when the warlords truth or DARE.
- I actually like this bar it was creative and a direct hit and a great ways to start the battle 8/10
Your nothing but fair; wont touch another win; not till after this;
if X marks the spot; then my verse just made a full contact hit.
It was an ok bar but when you start if X marks the spot it kinda lost its flo 5/10
People used to think highley of you; till they new your wins were fake;
& you really need to remove the list; so theres room for me in your loss space.
This bar had good intention but fake and space dont rhyme.. 2/10
Here's a comment; your verse was smashing; like it got in an accident;
were you dropped on your head as an infant?! because it made whack indents.
aight flo needs more material it seems your are trying to fit to many multi's you should just be direct straight to the point although multi's are good 5/10
Letting your self go poor; so wellfare will hand out some wins for the needy;
i'll leave your whole crew bleeding; havent you got enough wins; with me your gettin greedy.
Killer finisher this made me go wow this might be close after all...9/10
Total = 29/50


X Ecution
Unfortunately my comp screws up so I will comment on the the bars but not post them aight...
1st bar Crazy Multi's and good flo, the only thing there wasn't really a direct hit or punch so that will cost you 6/10

2nd bar Great way of working with multi's and great flo and this is what I was talking about punches which you did so 8/10

3rd bar Face and say dont rhyme even if you rapped like Bizzy Bone 2/10

4th bar Good punch need to elivate on vocab... 7/10
5th barI liked how it flowed although unfortunately I am not smart enough to understand what it meant but it was good 7/10
Total = 30/50

Overall Vote - X ecution
But I will not poll vote cause orbiit will say its a D/R vote but tight battle though

^^ Lol; look man, I really dont think it is fair of you to vote; if your calling me out in Diamond Mindz chat.

But w/e, fake & space do rhyme numnutz, read it slow..

Would you all please hit this up with a vote, it's getting slept on:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82475

Look Num nutz fake and space dont rhyme F***** retard second I didn't poll vote cause as I said you might think I am d/r on you...

um...ok on th eno poll vote............but it was explained well i think it should count but w/e............1

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lets get some votes please stop sleepin n leave ya links..1

hmm.....

Good battle props to both here, tought to call

Punches - x
flow - tie
metas - x
complexity/vocab - tie
enjoyment - tie

overall - x