Anger
what is anger
anger is when friends ditch you
when your girlfriend tells you we're through
when you put up with all kinds of shit
sitting at home listening to your family bitch
Anger is a form of frustration
being mad without concentration
anger is when people talk shit about you
and you get so pissed off, that you dunno what to do
so you take it all out on your friends
even take it out on your ex girlfriend
but you know it's not there fault
but you don't wanna admit it's your fault
anger is when you break down and lose it
when you look at your wall and abuse it
knuckles bleeding, blood drippin off the wall
when ya get so mad, you blackout and fall

What is anger?

just tryin a new style i guess
anyway uppim

i liked it.....the fact that the style was so simple........no one uses 4 and 5 syllable words when they are pissed......i also liked the structure made the entire thing build up.....and then it faded away just like anger.........i would have liked more in the body of the piece but we can't always get what we want........this is almost like st. anger by metallica you should check it out.....good drop......poetically speaking you have elevated quite a bit.....

respect...

good drop, it came through with some good quality questions...had a good sence of creativity..good flow...nice peice for a first time try man..keep it up

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yo i was defintely feeln this one.. haha sound like me 75 percent of the time... and the whole wall punchin thing.. it doesnt get any more truthful than that.. i know i punched a few good walls in my life.. any way it was an ok drop i reallly liked this line
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anger is when friends ditch you
when your girlfriend tells you we're through
when you put up with all kinds of shit
sitting at home listening to your family bitch
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real nice... simple though true and nice.. keep droppn. one.

thanks y'all
keep uppin

uppin uppin