Catch a case from this emcee with sublimianal criminal backrounds
i reign supreme in ya visual, do like 50 and back down
most emcees keep a book of rhymes, but i'm a vet wit boxes
like i'm punchin you out, but i mean rhymes in boxes
quick to leave you on ya back, like criminals gettin caught
by the boys in the blue, have ya rights stripped and lossed
aross the car you tossed, put in cuffs, they wisk you away
the hood love you but they pray for the day
a bullet hit ya heart, an ambulance'll take you away

Hahaha, this wasnt bad actually, it flowed nicely, good wording, nice direction and transition in this, it could of useda few more internals & multi's to spice it up a little but it wasnt bad, a little on the short side but ehhhh, from whats there it was pretty good.

Props.

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i thought it was a alright spit, thick the flow went well, but it looked abit unfinished.........overall decent..........

i hope it isn't up to your usual.. lol... it was a'ight... what else can i say.. 1

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Yeah this was a pretty good piece, good read i thought, your flow was good through out the piece, your content was good as well, your vocab was pretty good, overall id say it was a pretty good piece, Keep dropping, and if you get the chance check out me and Gene Pools Keystyle, much appreciated, thanks.