a clean demon that ceizes life like the light
twice the fright, see for yourself
the fire's higher through my eyes
i see to demise like the rise of diablo
we have no mercy, there's no worthy
just weak fighters lyin' ground floor
i'm tha twin towers collapsin' down on 'em
count on'em crumblin' like society structure
a tirant team plunders, hunger sees strugle
leave others utterly blundered
smother these concrete jungles
in blood 'n' screems of hurt un-to brothers
there's no escapin' my reign i bring rain
acid that eats through your skull an' takes over your brain
so far just pain but lust may surface some day
then disease will run rampid an' satin'll be in your veins
raping all these little fags

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hmm....i dont like the flow or the structure...vocab was simple and content a bit iffy...come up with a more original piece and i'll hit it up definately....elevate though.....


drop feedback on this hot shit right here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82853

it isnt as good as your usual but it was a good drop i personaly know your bette rthan this but still this would kill most cats on here

yo, this sucked... str8 up... i dunno.. the first guy don't know me.. but he was right, although he shud shut the fuck up... lol.. word, what up dawg.. i'm just used to flow for audio now, so my text shit seems weak, but trust it'll get better again... i got my old job back so i'm on a computer all day again.. lol.. yea playa... $16/h gotta love it.. 1

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