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10-02-03, 12:04 PM
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The Stalkers Intuition (ft BiZZUrk n HAZY.)
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*biZZUrk*
Excuse me miss you stole my heart and dropped your wallet So beautiful in an ugly world, as I follow you home from college I see the pain beneath your smile and the things on your shelf You can use my help, hello there; I know you better than yourself Ure perfect for me if only you knew, ure my crutch and my cushion You shower me with meaning; seeing your bush from the bushes I never thought I’d find you, you’re the cure for my cancer Is that a new perfume? Don’t resume I already know the answer My obsession is healthy and I assure you it’s nice and legal Lets talk about your fetishes at Starbucks as we sip cappuccinos *hazy* Chill took me over to my left I saw him lurkin--hands down his pants he was jerkin-- Dressed in black ... I feared a homicidal attack--but the murderous intent he lacked-- His eyes undressing me-testing me- a flirtatious giggle- I worked all my clothes down and rubbed my hands up my middle- Gracious I felt for being watched--the thrill of touching and I've been caught-- Outside my window is where he stood--id reach out n touch him if I could-- With my adrenaline revving I laid upon my bed-- pondering the thoughts that flooded his head-- Exhibition-a masochist's tradition- I displayed myself as if I were a limited edition-- My hands through my hair the moans escaping-- turned on at the thought of him raping-- My purpose was simple to get in ecstasy's binds...there was a reason I left open my blinds............. |
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10-02-03, 01:13 PM
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one reply is a good thing you kno
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10-02-03, 03:27 PM
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Dat was a bomb ass collab.
Bizzurks verse kould've used a lil elavation, but Hazy came on and merked da shyt outta da thread. No disrespect to bizzurk just keepin it real much luv holla at my shyt too. vverd-pley |
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10-02-03, 04:31 PM
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thought biZZUrk's verse was weak when i was reading it, so was expecting hazy's to be weak, but it destroyed biZZUrk's, the structure and flow was much better, i was just feelin it more...........peace....no hatin......aight
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10-02-03, 04:34 PM
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BANNED: Cheater
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only thing that let ya down hazy woz ya font colour...........wot
ha Ha hA HA................... |
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10-02-03, 05:11 PM
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this wasnt a battle you guys
geezuz actually bizz's verse was way better if it was we worked together as partnas yall shouldnt be crituqing on who's is beta by the way i love purple and pink |
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10-02-03, 07:08 PM
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Banned AKA Dante
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^HEY, YOU GUYS FORGOT TO POLL!
lmao, this is not a battle just a bomb diggy collab upp'n for votes............................I mean feedback, lol |
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10-02-03, 09:31 PM
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Banned AKA Dante
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^lmao, I need elevation? check your sig dawg If those were your rhymes then ure in no position to talk upp'n for comments |
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10-02-03, 10:18 PM
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damn yo... dat jawn wuz nice...
Vote- Lol syke naw... I wuz feelin bizzurks verse... derres a certain werd... imagery? i dont know but i coukd picture da shit he wuz talkin about... it wuz nice... I could also picture wut hazy wuz talkin bout... lol... dat wuz some ill shit... didnt know a verse could make u horny... overall i liked it all... Bizz's wuz liek a story and hazy's wuz like a porno.. real cute... lol holla 1 |
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10-02-03, 10:19 PM
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this shit was hot and i was like wtf??? when i saw the post before mine critcizing bizzurk...
i actually thought his hit harder myself... Excuse me miss you stole my heart and dropped your wallet So beautiful in an ugly world, as I follow you home from college I see the pain beneath your smile and the things on your shelf You can use my help, hello there; I know you better than yourself can you not see how well worded this is...i mean this is just a taste the rest was crazy bizzurk had nice wording,nice imagery,nice flow, and story theme... hazy- hit that twist and made it seem more reality and hit it with a diffeent aspect...i thought yours was worded well with nice wording,nice imagery,nice flow, and story theme... hot ass collab keep dropping... ~1~ |
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10-02-03, 10:52 PM
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Banned AKA Dante
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thx for the feedback Inertia
and word to young P Hazy's verse gave me a hard-on too, lol |
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10-03-03, 12:08 PM
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BANNED
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ewwwwwwwwwwww nasty boys put ya thingy's back in ya pants
sicko see i told you bizz you read my first line? ya hands down there jerkin I KNEW IT pervs lmao |
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10-03-03, 01:09 PM
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HAHAHAA, this shit made me laugh. funny as hell. nice stuff from both of you two, nuff talent. |
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10-03-03, 02:15 PM
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Banned AKA Dante
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^lol at hazy
I'm not the one who came up with the topic though  |
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10-03-03, 06:52 PM
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Banned AKA Dante
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upp'n (for the world to see)
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