Rules:
You spit first
15-30 Lines
No Hate
No D.R. (Cuz She's Hot) Even though she is...
No Crew

Str8 up?

Good Luck Though. --Now do I get my picture

Matta fact you dont get a pic, so dont clit ride
Your kinda like `diarhea`, and you know I dont let `shit slide`
Smoked like pot, yall know Mary Jane keeps it hot
You could french kiss a bullet and never `lick a shot`
you know I spit mad evil, have ya seein dead people
spittin so violent, this shit could get rated XXX without vin diesel
my verses got whitey shook, saw my reply and scared to look
cuz everythin i spit be a `record` like a `guiness book`
you been shaked up, find a new hobby that u can take up
cuz you try to sleep on mary jane, and never wake up
you gotta be stupid if u think i dont spit hot
the only icons you gonna be seein is ya desktop
ill trade ya pride for skill and use ya ego as collateral
cause the only way you'll ever be a big man is if you typed in all CAPITALS
wit combatent scripts, I don't squash beef, I flatten it, mary ravages n savages
you can't even fathom witts, ya badest shit is wack to this
sturdy lines, designed for balancing acts, matter of fact I'm taking my time
I'll wipe cover girl all over ya head to help you `make up` ya mind
can't react cause this rap is known to hold facts
Whitey ejaculates on spines just to say that he got `cum~backs`

Attn:Mary~Jane is Still A Virgin

Shitttt.... I changed my mind, I don't want yo pic. I wouldn't fuck you, I'd fuck the girl in yo sig (signiture).//1

When I ‘split yo lyrics wit razors’ it’s just part of my scheme, 13th Disciple just gave me yo spot in The Regime.//2

Damnnnnn Im Gangsta, wit no battles in 3 months, …. Fuck Mary-Janes I rather "puff on a blunt".//3

I don’t need you anyway - I got so many tricks up my sleeve that after Im done wit sex I slip hoes reciets. //4

I ‘dominate’ on niggaz throwin hard blows and ‘punchlines’, faster than me smoking Mary Janes in the ‘lunch-line.”.//5

Killer u wit vocab:

I think battleing "ELITE" is just part of yo phaze, so I had to wipe that fucked up look off of yo face.//6

Yo verse so stretched they had to use another page, "Extacy" got you so distorted thinking you gotta put water in a 12 guage.//7

Battleing "Herbs" it's juss a waste of my 'time', this hoe can't 'rhyme', but damn she a 'dime'.//8

I got 'white girl' checkin her 'race', lettin her give my ~cum'back's~ a taste.. This aint about feeding it's about puttin "Big Shot's" in they place.//9

Please take yo mom's picture out of yo sig, Very~Plain so dope MURDER I.N.C. should sign this bitch.//10

I kind of fell off topic and lost my vocab,
(Sorry bout not paying for your ride home in da cab) yo rhymes look backwards like some fucked up arab.//11

"HELL YEA IT FEELS GOOD TO TYPE IN ALL CAPITALS", so high I'm flying a plane through the capital.//12

People don't get my 'insane' sense of humor, next day after the battle they pronounce "Mary~Jane" dead of a brain tumor.//13

High 'electricity' got you feeling like a 'shockwave', Mary take yo viberator out the 'microwave'.//14

This girl wants it hotter than the white boys dick on the 'spot', pretending her dads me yelling "PAPI DON"T STOP".//15

Shit gets crazy when Im up in da room, got Mary~Jane's thong saying froot of the loom.//16 (God Damn She Fine)

Yo bitch aint notin personal, how about a lil head befo our porno rehersal.//17

And after that, I take you str8 to the bed, a female "50 Cent" takeing 'cum~shot's' to the chest.//18

I aint got no beef wit this 'whack' "Femcee" accept fo the 'fact' that this illeterate bitch is try'n to be like me.//19

Who is this bitch by the 'name' of Mary~Jane, you couldn't be ill if we shot AIDS inside yo veins.//20 (You know it kilt her)

My lines aint stretched, wordplays just outta control… (Since Mary has Herepes) me and Jane eloped.//21

FINISHER:

I didn't mean fo this to end in ~YoungWhiteThug~ clinchin the win, but juss remember don't eva battle the illest again.. Im known around here as the "Mary~Jane" pusha, gettin mad props becuz I can't stop dissin her, Fuck it i could have kilt that bitch in this one big "FINISH-HER".


Nice Verse "Baby Girl"!

C'mon ya'll don't sleep on dis battle. Upp'nnn...
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up up up

I think young won this because his punchlines were more direct than MJ's, and more insulting..........................

BREAKDOWN:

Flow:MJ
Punches:young
Structure:MJ
Sustainability:young

Overall:YOUNG, basdically his punches won it




HIT THIS UP:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82645

thanks

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sigs are for herbs...Thats why I got one!

Ayo, bottomline MJ smoked this white boy out the damn water. His verse was just too damn dumb, and his "ATTN: Mary Jane is a virgin" shit was too weak. A chick supposed to be proud about getting knocked off?! Anways, to YoungWhiteWhatever, get ya game up and come a lot more mature with ya rhymes, go buy a flow, and some real lyrics. The "fucked up arab" thing is foul as shit, the AIDS line is dumb, the herpes shit didn't even make sense. Mary Jane came through with an ill flow and came a lil' hard. Y'all know who my poll vote landed for. Holla at ya boy.

Now both of y'all go and drop me something honest on my battle..you can find it in the sig.

thanx yall uppin more

mary jane definetly ripped this shit better word play punches and and structure she got at whitethug....whitethug didnt come as hard good battle between both of you -no hate- stay hungry hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82737

C'mon ya'll thanx fo the input. Again nice verse.
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ya nice verse white... now uppin

wow, I have to give this one to YoungWhiteThug

harder disses, nice wordplays, and he showed alot more creativity


Vote = YOungWhiteThug


registered voters hit this up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82689

Breakdown:

Punches=MJ
Personals=Young
Multis=Mj
Wordplay=Mj
Vocabulary=MJ
Complexity=Mj
Creativity=Young

Overall=Mj

GOOD SHIT MA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Merk Lists Are Irrelevant.You Know Who You Are

Hey yo juss to tell ya'll I do have punchlines.
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aight MJ took this no hate no dr
flow= mj
personals= ywt
punches= mj
complexitity= mj
vocab= mj
creativity= ywt
wordplay= mj
vote= mj

nice battle *props* to both