I've hit every slum within a 5 mile radius
& had my eyes crooked like Miles Davis's
I can't blink anymore, my pupils are getting little
Cuz my pill bottle resembles a bag of skittles
I sit naked talking to an ant in the road
Cuz I've eatten enough acid for my spit to corrode
I'm on a one way street, going the wrong way
& my road to improvement has been under revamp for days
My welcome mat is half burned, the other half was sold
I drink more Nyquil then when I'm nursing a cold
I'm at my limit, the road is spinning making me sick
So I'll pull more vomitting acts then Hendricks
I bought a new peice for my dining room set
& loaded the chamber like an old army vet
I'm scum, it wouldn't matter if I was dead or alive
I'm on the outside, looking in the chamber of my 45......*BOOM*

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R.I.P.- Epimetheus
Robert L. Rem
1986-2003

This was aight. U shouldve made it longer. But it was aight. Check out my open mic if u can. holla back.

Would be better if it was longer. But the av is distracting

This was a good piece i thought, i liked reading it, it flowed pretty well through out the piece i thought, your content was good, vocab was good as well, overall it was a good piece, keep dropping.

it was a straight piece i feel wut ^ masta was sayin but u shoulda mad it longer

well ithought it was ok, for most, but there were one or two lines that just seemed out of place

"I'm at my limit, the road is spinning making me sick
So I'll pull more vomitting acts then Hendricks"

"I sit naked talking to an ant in the road"

thought these lines were weak.....but on the whole it was a pretty average drop.......................aight

^It's because they hold no relevance in your mind.

To get this look for the SUBLIMINALS

Oh and up. Thanks for peeping.

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R.I.P.- Epimetheus
Robert L. Rem
1986-2003