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Old 10-04-03, 04:54 PM   #1
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I'd sacrifice my own life just to see the Bastard hanged.
He deserves to burn in hellfire for this crime.
How could he? If he was there to see the tears streaming from her eyes i don't think he could live with himself.
He ruined her life...her whole life..and for what?
A few minutes of forced pleasure while he listened to her screaming, praying to the heavens to spare her pain.
What kind of man does that to a 14 year old girl?
A Sick Pervert thats what!
He didnt give her a chance to say no, just pushed himself on her while she lay there helpless and too weak to throw him off.
I wish to God i knew who the Dickhead was, if i ever find out i swear i'll rip his bollocks off.
And i'll get sent down just to show her that i care so much for her.
For all of them, were one big family and we look out for one another,
Cover each others backs. She wants to die.
This bastard has took away from her the only thing she consided truly hers,
The only thing precious in her whole miserable life.
Now shes turned suicidal, and i am aware that nothing i can say can make her better.
She cant go to the police, she says, she doesnt want to go through all that shit again.
She just wants to settle down and live a normal life.
And she swears shes alright but every night alone she cries, and begs the Lord to take her soul with him.
She has this on her mind every hour of every day. Its the one thing that she thinks about when were all out having fun.
I hate him so much its unbelievable, i only wish it was me going through it, not her.
I'd kill him. I really would. I'm not a murderer, it wouldnt be in cold blood.
The bastard has pushed me to the limit. And i dont care if i get sent down.
I dont give a fuck.
I just wanna see him pay for what he's done.
And hell will be blacker with his soul than it ever was before.
I swear to God th Bastards gonna pay.

I promised her...and i'm not gonna let her down.



this wasnt a normal poem...i didnt write it to get replies.i wrote it to get this shit off my chest coz i fucking hate him! her raped her. and hes gonna swing for it.
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Old 10-04-03, 05:31 PM   #2
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good luck findin him, thats sick. though i know many people like that, if they ever come near me ill shoot 'em.
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Old 10-05-03, 04:16 AM   #3
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To be absolutley fair, sick perverts are not like that. Sick perverts are the kind of guys who'll get a good look at a girl, and then think about it when they're alone in bed at night. The kind of guy you described was a rapist.

What's seriously even worse, is that many men are too stupid to realize when they've committed a rape. Seriously, a man generally has no idea to comprehend the subtle communications women make. Hell, even I can't make out the non-verbal speach of women.

Anyway... even I know rape is wrong and it shouldn't be committed. I suggest that you suggest to the victim that she seek help and treatment. Being raped is a very traumatic experience. It's hard for a person to deal with it on their own.

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Old 10-05-03, 05:37 AM   #4
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thanx for the support. I have already tried but she said she doesnt want anyone to know so i dont no what else i can do. But its great to know that when i have problems i can always count on RB to be their for me.

MUCH RESPECT
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Old 10-05-03, 07:21 AM   #5
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I felt the emotions in this... and I feel very sorry that your gurl had to go through this. I hope you can help her thru and that she can live her life again, although things like these leave scars.
Well-written... keep droppin and gud luck

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Old 10-05-03, 07:39 AM   #6
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thanx Split Eyez, it means a lot to me and i know it would mean a lot to her too, if she ever got to read it. Hopefully, life goes on and eventually she'll be able to hold her head up high once again.

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Old 10-05-03, 11:39 AM   #7
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Alot of emmotion...I'm sorry to hear about the girl. Its not a fun thing to deal with. I hope the guy does get what he deserves.
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Old 10-05-03, 11:41 AM   #8
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oh he will, our whole crew have promised her that, if we ever find the cunt, we'll kill him. N e way thanks for the support, this wasnt a poem just basically a flow of anger that he could do it to her. Shes 14 for Gods sake!
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Old 10-05-03, 11:44 AM   #9
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Yeah, I could feel the hatred...And I just wanna say I think its awesome how your doing this for her. Most people give up when others turn suicidal.

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Old 10-05-03, 12:30 PM   #10
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shit i kno wut u mean im reely feelin ur flow of anger.....i kno how that shit goes......so i was feelin this an it meant sumthin sumwhere in the back of my head.....an thas where the importnat things go so i kno this was good....besides its nuthin but honest so that juss makes it even better......make sha it hurts when u catch him................stay up...
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Old 10-05-03, 05:23 PM   #11
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iight

when you think about it, its really hard to belive that ppl can actually bring them selves to do something like that, and still after they rape someone have it in them to keep them selves alive! one of my friends here was raped too, but she was much younger, and even after a good 10 years, yes she still thinks about it but shes learned to have fun again and to move on with her life and im sure that your friend will to, and even thou nothing you think you say will help her, just tell her your always there for her, and just holding someones hand can save a life.

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Old 10-06-03, 01:47 AM   #12
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i really have felt this deeply. To many of my friends have went through this. When I found out It happend to my close friend it sent me over the edge. I found the sick bastard one day and alomost killed him. cops pulled me offa him. All anger and everything comes out strong and hard. very good.

if you ever find him don't kill him right away, make him suffer worse that anyone could ever suffer...
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Old 10-06-03, 02:20 AM   #13
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my g/f read this and wanted me to put this in here 4 her.

Devilish Princess knows what shes talkin about, I've been in the 14 year old's place. I like the poem, and even though the 14 year old is suicidal, all she has to do is stick by her and she'll get better. wont go away but it'll get better
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Old 10-06-03, 12:04 PM   #14
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devilish princess? jawho? n e way, thanks for the feedback from all, its amazing how many of y'all can actually relate...it just shows that RAPE is a huge problem these days and happens to a good percentage of young girls, its nice to know for my m8 that shes not alone. I know that if she ever got to read this she would be very grateful for all your support. As it is..i think she would cry if she read it, so i'll thank y'all on her behalf.
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Old 10-06-03, 02:14 PM   #15
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hmmmmm i cant really say much to this i will PM you a better reply soon because im afraid if i said something here it would only affend
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