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Old 10-04-03, 07:02 PM   #1
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Arrow Diss To G-Unit ~ Shady Records ~ Dre/N.W.A (just a joke) Peep this...

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I dun got beef wit any of em just a diss...

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I be thuggin the industry~
Runnin up on any MC~
50 Deep~we creep~Coma Crew put Foes to sleep~
We collide~wit anyone~you kno we' gon throw down wen we ride//

Lemme run up on these G's-in the Unit~
screw it~Lemme just pop out some Guerrilla Warfare on they Company~
U dun wnna 'Bump Heads' wit me~
Tony Yayo gettin raped in jail daily~
Banks~Shanks his cock into 50's mouth~thats the real reason he got a new dimple~
its simple~he didnt get shells busted in his face~he got a nut intrusted in his mouth~
Got into a Fight Wit Ja~Damn yo hard hes like 5'2?~
Shit u be thinkin im From Anartica the way i lay it cold~White boy yo mom can come live in my igloo~
Niggas afta this diss~people gon be like "Shady-Who?"~
from a Trailer Park trash~to poppin out his moms pill stash~
now he got some cash~son i could slang some ash and make as much as u do in a week//

Hook:
I be thuggin the industry~
Runnin up on any MC~
50 Deep~we creep~Coma Crew put Foes to sleep~
We collide~wit anyone~you kno we' gon throw down wen we ride//

Fuck the whole BadBoy industry~simply~
fakest G's Since 50 and Em think they kno MaKaVeLLi~
Obi Trice~i'd squash u wit da same diss twice~
yo guards to my soldiers~is like a Anval fallin on mice~
i'd Jack u and Bizzaree up at the same time~
Royce 5 9 disses yall~kno he thinkin he hard~WOW U CAN RHYME~
Dirty Dozen~and shit but sloppy~
if i handed u my supply yall still couldnt cop me~
Pop me? Drop me?~thats like sayin Snoop the same after he quit and rejoined C.R.I.P~
Dre~got his way~wit EzE toar his ass whole up~
Shit Hits The Fan~yo record industry his The Shit~my diss is the fan~yall gon get 'torn up'~
Yo mom wont even morn slut//

Hook:
I be thuggin the industry~
Runnin up on any MC~
50 Deep~we creep~Coma Crew put Foes to sleep~
We collide~wit anyone~you kno we' gon throw down wen we ride//

Fuck All yall~bitches*pause*~Face~
u aint shit since u made Fabulous yo 'baby'~
Bust-A-Rhymes~be Bitin-Some-Dimes(ugly females)~
since he did a drop wit 50~he think he hardcore~
bitch~b4 u n fake ass From queens start talkin~go slang in the yard more~
U be askin the same question as in yo movie when im done hittin u~'Got some Teeth'~
yo skill is beneath me~you be slangin nicks~
while me and my vatos~be slangin bricks~
I aint got nuttin else to say to yall~
When i roll 2 deep yall will fall~
imagine 100 deep~K.I.N.G~
We will fuck up anything~

Hook:
I be thuggin the industry~
Runnin up on any MC~
50 Deep~we creep~Coma Crew put Foes to sleep~
We collide~wit anyone~you kno we' gon throw down wen we ride//
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Old 10-04-03, 07:05 PM   #2
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ummm damn...
the disses were not all that great
flow was borderline horrible
word choise was bad...alot of those rhymes you took striaght out of songs they did
damn kid... this was not good
sorry
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Old 10-04-03, 07:09 PM   #3
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flow fell of at alot points, some parts were funny

couldnt catch da flow of da hook

wouldnt hurt to elevate a bit

but it was kinda funny tho

keep spitting

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Old 10-05-03, 12:39 AM   #4
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Good Lines:
Banks~Shanks his cock into 50's mouth~thats the real reason he got a new dimple~
Obi Trice~i'd squash u wit da same diss twice~

it was an alright diss song you should start at a lower level of dissing then going after these guys cuz just like dre said.. you guys are so far under my radar i dont know who the fuck you are.. and that basically all that i could of think of when reading this.. just keep elevating man
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Old 10-05-03, 12:59 AM   #5
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ewww look at your siggy, lmao...

neways back to the piece. I wasn't feeling that one. There is one good line -banks shanks his cock into 50's mouth that's the real reason he got a new dimple. Otherwise it was weak. Next time throw in some punches, metas. multies and better wordplay and you'd have a nice drop with a flow to it.
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Old 10-05-03, 01:02 AM   #6
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Quote:
Originally posted by The Realist
ummm damn...
the disses were not all that great
flow was borderline horrible
word choise was bad...alot of those rhymes you took striaght out of songs they did
damn kid... this was not good
sorry


I HAVE TO AGREE WITH THE REALIST
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Old 10-05-03, 01:02 AM   #7
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Quote:
Originally posted by The Realist
ummm damn...
the disses were not all that great
flow was borderline horrible
word choise was bad...alot of those rhymes you took striaght out of songs they did
damn kid... this was not good
sorry


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Old 10-05-03, 05:16 PM   #8
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Originally posted by Northern Touch.


I HAVE TO AGREE WITH THE REALIST


indeed i have to agree with them two fus dude u just suck really badly yo do us all a favor and NEVER think about rap ever again!!!!!!!!!!!! hollllllllla
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Old 10-05-03, 06:07 PM   #9
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That shit was just GungSta

Dissin ppl that would eat and shit u out in two seconds.....

Gungsta

it was horrible....foreal.... elevate dawg
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