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10-05-03, 01:20 AM
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..terror walks again..
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Peice Of Everyday Thought
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when worse becomes worse use thoughts just to kill cops
sittin bent with no hidden intent and thats to build bombs and the systems can watch ebs come with another ill drop speak in toungs so thoughts can be read reverse pill pop this poets mental blank from smokin dank and i pop pills elevated to being sky high so without doubt i can drop ill madd cause our taxes go to gettin nuclear bombs built as worse goes to worse as the simplicity still that cops kill  |
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10-05-03, 01:45 AM
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woo woo Koz leaves and im no longer band
Last edited by JOeY TeRRIFYING : 10-05-03 at 05:41 AM. |
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10-05-03, 04:24 AM
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Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop?
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Hm... sortofa...rhyming train of randomosital thought. That's what I got out of it. A seeming lack of control with the spillage of mental thoughts, but it still had complete and total sense and sensibility as the subject matter though changing held importance.
Am I right? Maybe.. yes.. no... perhaps... ~Islam~ |
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10-05-03, 05:40 AM
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^^^pretty much that and it was just a freewrite, so i just went with the flow
much appreciation foe the reply though Last edited by JOeY TeRRIFYING : 10-05-03 at 05:48 AM. |
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10-05-03, 05:40 PM
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Hmm...this was a bit different to me lol...I liked it though...short and..well nice lol...It flowed well, and was creative..nice drop...
peAce |
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10-07-03, 02:10 AM
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..terror walks again..
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^^^ nice line in ya sig ya twiztid lette also thanx foe the reply
peAce
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10-08-03, 09:55 PM
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up
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10-08-03, 11:04 PM
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Nice piece. It was worth the read and is so fucking true. Cops fucking kill people and people's hopes and dreams. So I hate cops with a passion and hate all in authority.
MM |
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10-11-03, 11:41 AM
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It lacked real order. But it seems that's the way it was written. A kind of freestyle write. Just writing what's on your mind. It was fairly sharp and striking. Line by line that is. And the way it ended left a strong if not mixed meaning. You know, started off with the 'being driven to insanity...killing cops.'...to a kind of explanation as such 'the cops killing the norm, the simplicity..'.
The cops representing the system. 'The man' as such. Nice. ..resp[.. |
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10-11-03, 06:25 PM
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^ Good Lookin both of yall
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10-15-03, 11:57 PM
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..terror walks again..
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up
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