Unique

"They Made Fun Of His Walk, The Way That He Speaks -
The Tone That He Sleeps.. Is He Retarded Or Unique?"

.. The Start ..

Spent Life Gimpin.. Jokes Of Special Olympics -
He Could Not Fix It.. Spent Time Tryin To Fight The Sickness -
The Visions.. Of Bein One Of Them Passed Frequently -
And Recently, Its Gotten Worse Like He Was Pieced Deceased -
He Was Freak.. To Everyone That Knew Him -
They Screwed Him.. And Say That He Was A Retard..Right To Him -
Its Stupid.. And He Could Do Nuthing But Be Himself -
Alone N' Un-Felt, He'd Melt If He Knew He Could Get Sum Help -

.. The Change ..

He Met A Kid, Popular.. But He Never Knew It -
He Once Screw'd Him.. But Said He Was Sorry.. Right To Him -
He Didn't Feel Stupid.. For Once, He Was Proud -
No Doubt, Was In Places That Before He Wasn't Aloud -
He Knew Sumone Who Cared, Someone That He Could Relate To -
The Pains Threw, "Let Your Personality Make You" -

.. The End ..

They Grew Up, Still Friends In Their Growth -
The Loathed, And He Was Happy To Say The Most -
Then He Was Approached, Didn't Under Stand The Answer -
But He Was Diagnosed With Eptileptic Cancer -
His Life Were Nuthing More Than Numbers Now -
That Year His Life Would End By Mid-Summer's Bow -
But He Vowed, His Whole Life To Let His Personality Make Him -
And Until His Life Was Taken, He Remain Un-Mistaken -
With The Funeral Over, Only One Person Remained As Perdicted -
Strayed Wishin.. As He Bent Over The Tombstone To Read The Inscription.. -

"They Made Fun Of My Walk, The Way I Would Speak -
The Tone That I Sleep.. But I Know I Died..More Than Unique"

damn holmes, its a shame this is gettin slept on cause that was a tight post, the structure and flow were both good, the vocab and wordplay were great, and the topic and content were hella original, great post man, keep at it, i was really feelin that.

peace......

Holla dawg, that wuz a pretty good piece, nice original topic. I also like tha style holmes. Keep writin'

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yeah i agree...this was a great piece..it was worth reading..your structure was good, i liked the way you set things up...your vocab was pretty good..it flowed very well through out the piece i thought...overall it was a good drop..keep dropping.

Thanks.. AnyMOre ?

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