40 minutes to post

14 lines max

melo go first.

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checkin in................................................ .......................... spittin in a minute......

dawg where u at? it been 40 minute since you check in, ill give ya a little more time just post ya damn rhyme............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......

im bout to reverse you, put u back in n delete u b4 yo momma birthed you/
claiming that bling, it aint bling if its a chipped off piece a glass shaped in a toe ring/
i got ya 40 minutes, after this u been verbally raped, feelin dirty making appointments at the clinics/
u should learn to listen more then u speak, hearin peoples shit n bitin it is the formula for defeat/
fuck stone this shits written in concrete
ill blaze this place leave u unknown, left w/ no trace, ill do u like Hopkins n leave u de-faced/
let ya bling shine, thats how ya status u define.. u rappin is straight up a crime, my cushion change is the closest thing you'll get to a dyme/
i dont need no 14 lines i cane kill u in just 9/
ur growing scared awaiting my flow, what she gon say? nobody knows..
im reppin that Izz-I, guaranteed foreign to u, u a valley guy reppin that "vard" , im sure gangstas down there by now r good at pretending their hard/

my bad.. i couldnt get back on RB................................................ .......................there it go..

Don't talk 'bout my ma' that way, she's dead,
she died just before your mom gave head and bled in bed//
What tha fuck does it mean to be de-faced? Man your a disgrace,
please make haste and get outta my face!//
And please don't jerk off wit kidz, Jizz-I'll do it for you,
and i'll do it again to ya momma too//
I beleive ya when ya say ya wrote dat in concrete, it sounds so incomplete on dope street, it's as bad as raw meat//
You think you all big wit fame, you give rap a bad name,
you got no game, your rhymes are lame, you should be put in tha hall of fame with ya pic above ya false name//
I'm sorry you tha one I gotta harass, but ya smell like natural gas,
I think I'll pass my next Biology class, cause i dont wanna see how much inertial mass ya pack in that sack//


I couldnt get on the website til now, sorry for my delay as well.

uppin 4 votes #1................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ...................

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UPPIN This Battle For The Newbies
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They Shits Gettin Slept On Man
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^^good look.........................not even 1 vote??? lol.... damn! wassup w/ that shyyyt?................100 characters.

i'd say this was an even battle.....both flow and punches and structure i had tie.....but melodramah gets it for being more original....k dubb played off his verse so that takes away from originality

i agree wit gaytime except that dub fukin sucked badly almost as bad as olidog and rookie and hot ice anyway

vote=drama

..........holla............

I think this was quite a weak battle, too much feedin etc......................however there was a clear winner.............

Melodramah won this cos his punches were original whereas K-Dub just fed,fed,fed instead of throwin punches.........Melo's flowed better too........................

VOTE- Melo

Hitt this up to repay with an honest vote, peace

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2-0 what what... thanks for the votes..... we needs more tho.. hollA... uppin number 2 ! .................................................. ........................

I give this shit to melodramah even though both verses were weak. K- Dubb you need to install som flow man your shit was allover the place even out ya bars.

Best Line -

im bout to reverse you, put u back in n delete u b4 yo momma birthed you/
claiming that bling, it aint bling if its a chipped off piece a glass shaped in a toe ring/

^^^ pretty weak but good enuff to take the battle

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