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10-06-03, 02:17 PM
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Return Of Mistress
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Profoundly anticipated authentic its never prewritten that’s why hoes often hate it//
Stay creeping in the rap game slaying you fake Femcees like the return of the dragon// I tend to stay on top matter of fact I’ve blown past most in 57 knots to the medallions// No matter how long I disperse I won’t fall off where I’m from I ride the black stallions// You nigga sit around faithfully awaiting what I got to say like it’s a Sunday communion// Now that my NIGGA RUTH’s BACKS WARLORDS HAVEN A MAJOR REUNION// What I Say OCTOBER 6th Im coming back in hurting the game like a old lady’s bunion// I push the 03 Escalade, TV’s in the head rest, Sitting on 20’s that’s in motion whn I stop// Bet believe am paid;Destiny’s not manifest,sitting on 20mill smooth lke lotion & on top// Femcees can’t do what I do.so they gots 2 hate me set me up make me stuck like glue// Funny once confronted for a battle they hibernate like they sick in bed with the flu// My flows unravel like a bunker buster, I hit these bitch 99% don’t even have a clue// YO this is just a warm up, I haven’t been in open mic in a minute just thought I’d throw a little sumthin sumthin out there! Holla @ cha gurl WRITTEN FOR ENJOYMENT DON’T TAKE IT PERSONAL. |
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10-06-03, 02:25 PM
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That is a good battle verse. You use clever wordplay and you got plenty punches. The structure is solid and the flow is real sick. All that is lacking are metaphors and multies. Other than that it was a good solid piece. My favorite line- Funny once confronted for battle they hibernate like they sick in bed with the flu... lol Stay active.
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10-06-03, 05:01 PM
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IP:
Thanks Dirty I will definitly stay active and love the advice!
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10-07-03, 06:12 AM
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IP:
she said it as it is i liked it none the less mad props mami
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10-07-03, 10:25 AM
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IP:
Thanks Word! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~uppin
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10-07-03, 10:28 AM
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IP:
peep my new peace
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10-07-03, 04:01 PM
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IP:
U know it son1
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10-07-03, 05:49 PM
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IP:
yo u had a good flow goin....
like the wordplay and vocab... peace.... keep droppin... |
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10-07-03, 07:13 PM
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Can u beat me?..Hell No
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nice ass flow gurl. that shit was tight nice metas and vocab. keep elevatin. that is a nice verse.
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10-08-03, 10:27 AM
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IP:
Thanks most deff. UPPING
UPPIN |
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10-08-03, 10:45 AM
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IP:
^^^DAMN ya'll should see her Booty....owheee...lol
But WOw!!! Misstress mami u rockin the mic deffinitly Sick Shit....................Missed ya as ussual
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I Came Back Like Bustin Nuts On Spinal Chords Try Me Mofuckaz............ |
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10-08-03, 01:40 PM
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IP:
LOL they shouldn't see my boooty lol
NE THANKS so crazy |
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