Okay, You Wanna Play That Way
I May Just Change What I Say
To Please You, Ease You Today
Or To Appease You, You Diseased Fool
Fuck That You Bug Me, Two Fleas Drool
Since The Pre-School, You Just Play Cool

I Thought You Was Close To Me, Like A Brother
But Now I Can See You're Fake, Like The Others
People Like You Are Feeble And Will Bring Sins Down
You Look Around Dumb Founded, The King's In Town
So Bring His Crown, And Get Off Your Ego Trip
I Used To Be Weak And Not Speak When We Go Sit
Everyone Says He Knows Shit, But He Dont Know Dick
So Thank You For Letting Me Flow Sick, Keep It Simple
But I Hate To Burst Your Bubble But Your Fame Is Just A Pimple . . .

Two Of My "Boys" Are Shady
Motherfuckers, And One,
The One This Is Mostly
About, Is Some Fake Bitch
One . . .

Ok...this wasnt too bad...it flowed pretty well i thought...in the begining you had some good multies and internals that made it flow pretty good...your vocab could be better though...try adding some more wordplay and metas...but keep elavating...and keep dropping.

Thanx For The Reply . . . Uppin For More

yo it had an alrite flow....
it let itself down toward the end.....
could have been beta if ya elevate ya vocab an word play....
....keep droppin....
...peace...

Uppin For More Replies

hmm....
flow flow flow....it was your downfall
internals and mulits were simple but better than nothing
good drop, come harder next time

if you would be so kind
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