you cant tell me how to live my life/
you cant tell me how to survive and get by/
you cant tell me what goals to strive(for)/
you cant tell me when to give up and take a hike/
you cant tell me when to take criticism light/
you cant tell me what to see through these eyes/
you cant tell me when and when not try, fight or even cry/
you cant tell me how to handle this gun, knife, or this fucking mic/
so back off dawg, cause u aint me, and will never be nothin like(me)/

this is basically for all the poeple that has had people punk them around, or had parents who wanted them to be something else.

this poem is ment to be basic, because it is suppose to prove a point more then any of that other shit people judge on

peace

damn right lol, thanx

can i get some other opinions on this, i wan to know what other people think about it

dammit i got the point an could prolly wear this shit on a shirt.....lol....like they said long before me...fight the power........

anymore opinions that i can get from others
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aight anymore people never really wrote like this before so can i get some more opinions

Your writing was very true. No one can tell you what to do and how to do it. That is totally up to you. When people tell you to do things that don't wanna do, tell them to f@#* off and die.

MM

Any true words or any words at all are poetry. No one can be controlled. Just cuz someone wants you to be something that your not, don't follow it. if they try to change you screw it. they don't love you for you. Simple for this was the best way to get this point out. This is sweet and it has given me an extra "boost" in life to push more and be my true self. Thank you spect JT

thanks yo, anymore........................................... .....................

you want replies?
then give them
simply stated

aight hazy i thought u would come back ans something about mine, after i did urs