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Bulletin News Flash......Carson Reveals all alias's......
Carsonjet-2k4
DJ JET
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Now son......Don't come in here ready to rip the record-
Cus Honestly that's played.....an so is that Carson Daily Crap-
Be Original

Now...We May Begin......
Better 'Face' it...your avi? only way your spittin 'Nice'-Call'in u a Vet? Cya'more like 'Weighted' dice-/1
(cheap and overweighted)......lolz
Notice 3 losses came infronta hundred posts'shows ta boast'-this kids been poppin 'Cock' like 'Home Improvement' hosts-/2
(Cock.....glue)
Forget'**Gassin'up**'I re-labell this child wit my cruise controll-Give'em an extra 'Hand' an he still throws outta Fold-/3
Cop? Where?...oh wait,never mind thats jus the polls...'5.0'....Carsonjet yo.... take anotha one home-Cyanide couldnt merk on-line'wittan "Ebay" loan-/4
Change ya tone...Lyrically u couldnt be fresh if u "Reynolds Wrapped"-This kat's been lapped....Mad...he lost can't find an ass ta Tapp-/5

Aight this fag been bitchin afta me for time….
So its time to bum rape him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wot do you interpret wen ya hear the word Carsonjet…jus an illiterate chump from Boston
But with 43 losses how can this bitch be a Vet…he couldn’t even compete, he jus lost’Em.
This loser be low fares, but I jus paid him in tha Fullest…jus a herb for Junior Productions,( avatar )
He don’t even contain flare, he gotta be tha Dullest…Takin his record away like Reductions.
So fuck the fucking Red Sox…they be tha best from ya area yet they still be no doubt Wak,
I’ll be poundin miles on ya Clock…coz you’ve now been merked by the weakest of Attacks.
April 2003? Yet ya record so many defeats…and still getting merked in each of ya Aliases,
You couldn’t step to me if ya had 1000 Feet…you old n tired horse, ya been killed at tha Races.
So jus answer me this Question…your 19 years old and you still aint learned to stop Dik Ridin,( prof’ )
But ya still don’t listen to tha Lesson…after this loss, the productions reject you to Confide-In.

R.I.P(RoT iN pIeCeS)……………AIGHT LETS GET SOME VOTES AGAINST THIS FAG..

Damn I hate him

my avi contained...."cheap low fares"

like chrit says...."hehateme wha?".....lolz.......

uppin for some fair votes..........................................
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uppin............................................. ...wot a loser.................lol....................damn this guys 19 and he still be a sad twat......sort ya life out chump.........he's avater said cheap low fairs....he knows he been beat and thats why he did it.......nervous?....................well stop the beef in here and lets get some votes...............1st

didnt i just type that?......lolz.........
stop the vote swayin or i will slapp u wit my cock so hard u'll think it was 9/11 all over again.......

no moe free-post........pc*1*

Carson's Verse

Better 'Face' it...your avi? only way your spittin 'Nice'-Call'in u a Vet? Cya'more like 'Weighted' dice-/1
(cheap and overweighted)......lolz

First line's played, fact that it's a personal gave it a somewhat redeeming factor. 2nd was okay.

Notice 3 losses came infronta hundred posts'shows ta boast'-this kids been poppin 'Cock' like 'Home Improvement' hosts-/2
(Cock.....glue)

Was okay...kind of a stretch on the whole cock/caulk thing

Forget'**Gassin'up**'I re-labell this child wit my cruise controll-Give'em an extra 'Hand' an he still throws outta Fold-/3

Okay

Cop? Where?...oh wait,never mind thats jus the polls...'5.0'....Carsonjet yo.... take anotha one home-Cyanide couldnt merk on-line'wittan "Ebay" loan-/4

You stretched the shit outta that first line to hit the rhyme scheme, 2nd punch was decent.

Change ya tone...Lyrically u couldnt be fresh if u "Reynolds Wrapped"-This kat's been lapped....Mad...he lost can't find an ass ta Tapp-/5

1st punch was weak, 2nd was eh

Overall a decent verse. You had a lot of shit that's been seen. Just reworded....couple original ideas....just not very hard hitting.

Lyrical's Verse

Wot do you interpret wen ya hear the word Carsonjet…jus an illiterate chump from Boston
But with 43 losses how can this bitch be a Vet…he couldn’t even compete, he jus lost’Em.

Shitty first line opener....good 2nd punch

This loser be low fares, but I jus paid him in tha Fullest…jus a herb for Junior Productions,( avatar )
He don’t even contain flare, he gotta be tha Dullest…Takin his record away like Reductions.

1st line wasn't too good, 2nd was uber shitty

So fuck the fucking Red Sox…they be tha best from ya area yet they still be no doubt Wak,
I’ll be poundin miles on ya Clock…coz you’ve now been merked by the weakest of Attacks.

Okay...if you related the Red Sox to him....that mighta been good. The way it stands...crap. You're sayin your shit is weak with the second line? You coulda said you weren't trying...but callin your own shit weak...bleh.

April 2003? Yet ya record so many defeats…and still getting merked in each of ya Aliases,
You couldn’t step to me if ya had 1000 Feet…you old n tired horse, ya been killed at tha Races.

1st line was okay, 2nd was gay.

So jus answer me this Question…your 19 years old and you still aint learned to stop Dik Ridin,( prof’ )
But ya still don’t listen to tha Lesson…after this loss, the productions reject you to Confide-In

Where? Who was he dick ridin? give us some prof'....or it's just a pointless punch. Do they confide in him now? Carson...are you the Productions Psychiatrist? aka weak punch

Not beefin, but that verse sucked Lyrical. I haven't peeped any of your other shit. Maybe you just had an off day. That shit was horrible. I'm just hopin you weren't feelin it this battle.......especially with a 9-3 record.

Carson took this in every category...no doubt about it.

Vote ~ Carson

Plz hit this battle up with honest votes:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=82923

ok............^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^herb>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>2nd............................................... ..........

Carson took this he had better punches, personals and flow. Lyrical used to many played punches. He also tred to strecth his ryme scheme too much

BEST LINE -

Cop? Where?...oh wait,never mind thats jus the polls...'5.0'....Carsonjet yo.... take anotha one home-Cyanide couldnt merk on-line'wittan "Ebay" loan-

VOTE - CARSON

Wierd Battle Son yo
ok heres my overall LC verse was easier to read and understand but had not much punches that were strong
Carson ur verse his hard to read next time make it easier and not that sloppy son but u got this vote from me Hollaz
Vote=CJ

ooppsss i did it again........

i hate these peeps wit nice records that suck-
it is my callin to merk em all, the vets are what are a problem for me...lolz
notice Cyanide....i dont battle all newbies.....that is why i am at loss #43.....

uppin 3-0.....hope u learned ya lesson fool....

o yeh and hitpanik....thanks for structure advice' i was tryin summin different and im glad u commented on it....
Think i will trach this structure.....pc*1*

blah...........hit this up voterz.................uppin
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