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Old 10-07-03, 04:31 PM   #1
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...::Want A Sex Change ?::...

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Ever wandered what it'd be like to have a sex change
Be categorized as one thing then have aspects change


Is it derranged to dream to be in others walks of life?
No one would complain that I always stalked a fight
Court a dike and be one myself to get males attention
Didn't assume so soon down this i'd need prevention
Conceive relations to that of satan and the holy one
Males mate and move on and reactions so coldly done
Only one to run?Nah if I had a child i'd get up and leave
Only parent would drive me wild and only left to plead..
For proceeds of support cuz i excede distraught now
My structure would leave me unable to retort in rows
Resort to *plow*...How? cuz i a women strives tops..
Everbody else.. think of the women today in hip hop
They got everybody else in their concoct *Why is that?*
Shake there bootys..Males thinking..O_O that'd suit me
Males don't act reputably they detract a women beauty
I'd rather have huge boobs, curvy hips and spit mutely
Dicks crucially important to me and portent to the G's
Have sex with me so easily as ABC..Disacrodant to me
Really? Yeah there ornaments to me to show I'm sick
All these thoughts have constapated..Don't give a shit


But i exist as a man and will persist to not give damn
Feminity=Care.. I'll spit oestrogen so it's utility declares



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Old 10-07-03, 04:37 PM   #2
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yo i like the flow in this man.... u had it goin fo a while there.... nice vocab an multies.....props....keep droppin.....
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Old 10-07-03, 04:43 PM   #3
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I Didnt Like The Concept..But Flow was Good good Vocab..and multis...good job all around...sept the Concept i just wasnt fealin about like mens attiention...maby u...not me...lol anyways good job though...keep dropin open mics..and ull get better..and soon become real good lol...1
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Old 10-07-03, 05:21 PM   #4
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I didn't like the concept either but you killed it with multi's and stayed on the topic throughout good drop and keep elevating
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Old 10-08-03, 05:34 AM   #5
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Yeah...I felt like doing a silly topicc...that no one else would have done...Of course these aren't my views..I was spitting some fucked up shit for a laugh..hOlla
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Old 10-08-03, 05:39 AM   #6
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this shit was dope in a way...the topic was crazy...I wasn't really feelin' the whole sex change thing...but I give you props for creativity...the mutiez and flow were nice...and wordplay were there...this was a dope ass drop for what it was...holla at my collab with ~RuthLess~ when ya get a chance...it's called ''What I See"...
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Old 10-08-03, 05:56 AM   #7
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i liked in all togeather and the idea was hot very different
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Old 10-08-03, 06:52 AM   #8
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The concept of this was ehh, but the way your wrote it was pretty decent. Good flow, even lines, didnt see that many internals, but overall this was pretty good my man. .
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Old 10-08-03, 07:23 AM   #9
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Meh I Didn't Really Feel It..Some Lines Were Just Stupid...It Wouldn't Be Good To Spit Or Anything..I Dunno Just Up Your Lyrics And Flow And That...G'Luck..Pz..
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