Thoughts Strung, Visions Seem Distorted.
Plots Hung, All Hopes Have Been Aborted.
Everything Becomes Harder To Work With.
Like Suicidal Minds Full Of Quirked Twists.
Jerk This? Staggering Around In A Daze.
Seemlessy Falling, Can't Handle The Rage.
Life or Phases? Brain Starts Crashing Down.
Writing Pages, But Literarly Passing Nouns.
Open The Dictionary, All Rhetorical Questions.
The Pills Do Nothing, Can't Feel The Essence.
Dont Want Suggestions, Leave Me In Peace.
Leave Me Be, Not You, Dont Wana Be Like Me.
Deprivation of Sleep, Is Causing The Grief.
Just Can't Take It, It's Time For Faiths Leap.
What , Just My Luck, As I Jump, I Fall Asleep.

*THUD*

wtf were you thinking
well yea this was great like all your other drops
but whats going on in your head

i like the Dictionary line...good drop kid

lol, dope. ^and realist.. sureal is sexy.
pretty good flow and all that. great imagery, you hoe, how u always come so dope the world will never know.

feebles kissing ass again, lmao

anyway... that was pretty dope,
good flow and word play in that...
and that topic..... where the fuck did you get that motive?>
was you trippin? lol,
anyways... another dope drop,
A.T.

sureal i really liked this peice....it was just dope..ecven the thud at the end....rating 8/10

the first line had me hooked....nice shit sureal..nice drop...keep it up

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^ Who the fuck is you, jacking my sig like that.. hoe.


Anyway, it was dope. I think you should start doing audios though..

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nice drop nigga i was feelin the vocab and the overall flow. pretty interesting topic as well. nice drop playa

^lol


This was a real good piece, ...
U had some mad vocab.
And some nice flow in here,
And i think this sounds good on audio.
But this was a overall Good Piece,
Some real ill lines, Props.

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Hmm It was Dope...But half Of the Replies Were Ass Kissing.

It Was A Different Subject, No Doubt about it, which Is why I Could Say That I Wasn't Feelin it, like Some Of Your Other Pieces. Some Lines in The Piece were Pure Genius, Others Seemed To Be Filler.

Life or Phases? Brain Starts Crashing Down.
Writing Pages, But Literarly Passing Nouns.
Open The Dictionary, All Rhetorical Questions.
The Pills Do Nothing, Can't Feel The Essence.

I Was Feeling Those Lines The Most.
Otherwise, This Was A Dope Piece, But It Had A Different Aura About it, which Made It A Little More Difficult To Enjoy. Also, The Flow Seemed Too Quick, but Other Than That, It Flowed On A Poetic Vibe, And I Wasn't Really Expecting Something Like That. Good Shit Though.

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