ite dogg rulez =
8 linez
ill spit 1st u spit 10 mins after
no d/r etc.

gd luck...................................pz

ite checkin in................................................ .................................................. .....................................pz

aigggght.......................................... .................................................. ........................................

ite

listen jego go to da nurse about your *choke*,
then see the surgen about no longer wanting to be a *bloke*(transexual lol)

this stuff mite be shit cus i havent rapped in *ages*,
but my words are just waiting to pounce, like animals in *cages*,

the only animals your be seeing is your girlfriends *crabs*,
you can only see your dick in the mirror cus of all yall *flab*(s)

so listen faggot u aint reached puberty, so sit on ur *pushchair*,
this faggot thaught he found his dick but, found out it was a pubic *hair*


biatch..................pz

ite little rushed yall cus he sed 2 hurry up so bit shady...........................u got 10 minz to drop man .................................................. ..............pz

yo look that was just stupid so i'll just tell you da truth,
your a ruthless fool with a life of no use and your last verse was the proof

i've never once been challenged by such low mental capacity
fo now on follow afta me cuz im a rap masta classicaly

here listen you english idiot priss bitch
was it tea time in UK, is that why it took u 10 minute to spiT?

a dip shit worthless dirt verse dont EVER stand a chance,
u should just quit spittin now and maybe learn to break dance

UPPPPPPIN

and this fool is from ENGLAND thats what this line was about:
"here listen you english idiot priss bitch
was it tea time in UK, is that why it took u 10 minute to spiT?"

peaace

giv a fuck dogg get over it man y r pll going to vote for u over me jst cus im english this shits about rappin man not ur little penis............................................. ..............fuck u newbie..............................biatch

shit fool i was just explainin my line. it wouldnt be a good line unless someone knew the thinkin behind it. chill out dawg
that post wasnt about votes, it was just explainin the line
calm down dude

bitch dat was abit ovious man explain it in () nxt time man............................................... .................................................. .................pz

ite uppin(1) honest votez plz dnt let dis 1 die thx yall.............................................. .................................................. .................................<b>pz</b>

both you stop bickering, tho i cant poll but i say oli did better of the two noobs

better disses, thats it in a nutshell

Vote = Oli

ima break it down:
opener:tie
finisherli
wordplayli
structure:tie
punches:Oli
MY VOTE:OLI

jego u had a nice verse, but only 4 lines altogether dawg.

Oli u was consistant, but the gya thing is a bit played, transexual:lol


peep this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84191


aiight

peace

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yeah he had 4 lines too, it was four line limit. man i cant belive fools actually like your punches. "oh your so agy u have a small dick" shits amateur. chocke bloke age cage crab flab chair hair
that sounds like a 5 year old tellin me rhymin words.

u wanna batlle wit me, muthafuckin u might tell me to stop rappin an learn to break dance, that is a hard ass punch u lil pussy

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