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10-09-03, 08:54 AM
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..Soft Focus..
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havent been on in'a while..so im just gunna drop summin quick
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Hustlen the obscene faster then'a suns ray
Creating photosynthisis in my every day Growing an stalling preparing to achieve Grasping the american dream from a teen God like mind a christian in my prime Still get held back though all the time Zoo's keep us caged in, whats earth? The same thing? Better or worse? Can't fully explain my thoughts today If i did, it'd be a boneless x-ray Water flowing, rainbows shine Fogs blind, Rains god crying Thunders surpreme, a holly beem show theres hope to exscape this dream Mentality showing i can only live in'a certine Proximity behind a window wit'a curtine Flowing lava of thoughts burning souls Call me jesus, destiny i can control Never follow the leader, im the teacher Pluto's man..COLD, call me the preacher Frozen like a photo, i sit an glance Things will get better, if i take a chance
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10-09-03, 11:30 AM
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BANNED: Cheater
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the most positive thing i can say is the flow was alright. thought the structure was a bit basic and the multi's were quite weak and the content didn't really do any thing for me.....All in all a weak drop.............peace!
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10-09-03, 04:16 PM
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Word.
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Yeah i agree...the flow was pretty good...But yeah everything else seemed kinda weak...just work on it and you will get it back...but it was ok for not doing it in awhile i guess...but keep at it...keep elevating...and keep dropping.
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10-10-03, 03:55 AM
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pop you are beyond this ......
i cant comment more .if you read you'll see. |
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10-10-03, 01:52 PM
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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how have you been gone...this shit was good
granted it wasnt top notch, it was still good flow was your best point on here good drop if you would be so kind http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84636 |
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10-10-03, 05:44 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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just a quick spit...nothing to fancy lol...i'll try harder next time..peace
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